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It's time to say goodbye

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vandana
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0 posted 01-05-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Do you know
It's time for us,
To say goodbye,
Love has ended
with the broken hearts,
Shattered pieces broken,
No turning back ,
No coming back,
Do you know love has ended,
The sky is covered
with the dark clouds,
The stars was hidden,
It's gonna rain anytime,
You can see the pain
I'm going through,
No songs on the radio i hear,
No kisses ,no goodbyes,
no tears,no fears,
But you can see
the pain I'm going through,
Do you know ,
It's time for to say goodbye,
There,maybe ,
thousands reasons
why in the world we're so clam and quiet,
There are days that are short ,
There are nights that are long,
When you and I didn't say goodbye,
To eachother,
No goodbyes,no kisses,
no goodbyes to say,
No single moment we spend,
But do you know,
It's time for us to say goodbye,
© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 01-05-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nice one Vandana...  I liked it.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 01-05-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is so sad! Goodbye without even saying a word..not sure I could do it...  
Denise
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3 posted 01-06-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A great poem, Vandana....sad but great!

 Denise



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Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 01-06-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Whew!, I thought you were saying good-bye to us! This poem is lovely, but good byes are always sad
Liz
JamesMichael
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5 posted 01-07-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Yes that is a very painful time when you know its over, its not working out, and as you said so well no turning back and no coming back...cause its over.  And now it seems like only pain is in our future.  So true that we don't notice the songs anymore...the ones that are for lovers.  Sometimes we forget that every beginning will have an end.  I enjoyed the reality of this poem because life has its good times and bad times and this is definately one of those bad days.    James
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6 posted 01-07-2000 06:30 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Vandi!
Very touching indeed! Great poem!
love,
neitham
whiskey
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7 posted 01-07-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

vandana
This is so sad , But very good I like it  
Corinne
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8 posted 01-07-2000 11:21 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

So poignant, Vandana!  And it is always a dark day when love ends, even if the sun is shining!

Corinne
 
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