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J.B.SR
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0 posted 2000-01-05 05:46 PM





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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-05 06:01 PM


A beautiful, loving tribute to your grandmother!

 Denise


Munda
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2 posted 2000-01-05 06:19 PM


Beautiful and loving indeed !
Deborah
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3 posted 2000-01-05 06:22 PM


Your poem really made me think about my own "best" grandma.  She is 85 and sometimes I think that I'll be so lost without her because she is my best friend and mother.
  Thank you for sharing your poem, it is beautifully written.
           Deborah

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4 posted 2000-01-05 08:15 PM


Great tribute to your grandmother..It reminds
me of my beloved grandmother also.. I like the way you also included Heaven into the
poem..great match-grandma & Heaven..They
interchange beautifully,don't they? I also
like these kind of thoughts-they are so full
of respect of our loved ones gone on..May the
Lord bless you & give you much more of the
same to share with us..  "Honor thy father
    and thy mother!"     james david

Paul Hoekman
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5 posted 2000-01-06 10:43 AM


   THANKYOU SO MUCH!
           paul

Meadowmuse
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6 posted 2000-01-06 02:00 PM


What a poignant poetic tribute you've shared here. Thank you. She must have been so special.

Dear LadyClaire



J.B.SR
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7 posted 2000-01-06 05:32 PM


Thank for your replies
She was very special to me.

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