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Kid Pedestal
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since 01-04-2000
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Chandler, Arizona


0 posted 01-05-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for Kid Pedestal   Email Kid Pedestal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kid Pedestal's Home Page   View IP for Kid Pedestal

I shun to think what would happen
If I was to break that stained glass window of her heart.

My emotions for her bleed profusely on the pavement
of her soul, and my quest to release her burning
desires is never ending.

But how do i decide if this is that right path
for me, for another light sparkles in the corner of my life.

Another light, as beautiful and profound as the first...

I know not which way to go.
Only time stands confident that I will make the
right choice.


© Copyright 2000 Adam Newberg - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 01-05-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah kid....sometimes choices are not easy.
Deborah
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2 posted 01-05-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

Choices can be hard, and you are right, often only time will show the right path to you.  But sometimes even time can't tell you and all you have to follow is your heart.  It is a nice poem, I hope you make the decision best for you and the people involved.
      Deborah
jaxjoy
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Nice work.  Light can be blinding sometimes.
hmm..to follow the heart or the mind?
Dreamer_556
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4 posted 01-06-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for Dreamer_556   Email Dreamer_556   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dreamer_556

That's lovely!
In answer to Jaxjoy's question.. follow the heart!  

~*Dreamer*~
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