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Seaangel
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since 1999-07-27
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Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 2000-01-05 05:15 PM


(This was written Christmas Eve, thinking about my life..)

Curling up she said
Trust is for fragile things
to break upon;
Bonding makes blood,
present or promised;
And in future angels weep.
Follow my precepts,
she chanted to herself,
curled up in wet hills of grass;
Watching the silent moon
ease in white ascendency,
and quiet a desperate voice.

© Copyright 2000 Angela King - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-05 05:27 PM


This is so beautiful, Seaangel! Especially the ending!



 Denise


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 2000-01-05 06:13 PM


One word...lovely  
Martie
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3 posted 2000-01-05 06:29 PM


You have created quite a mood in just a few words--very well done, I say.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

caroline
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4 posted 2000-01-05 06:40 PM


Absolutely gorgeous  

A house full of talent you have over there, don't you!      


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



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