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Fearful Choices

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Seaangel
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0 posted 01-05-2000 05:15 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seaangel

(This was written Christmas Eve, thinking about my life..)

Curling up she said
Trust is for fragile things
to break upon;
Bonding makes blood,
present or promised;
And in future angels weep.
Follow my precepts,
she chanted to herself,
curled up in wet hills of grass;
Watching the silent moon
ease in white ascendency,
and quiet a desperate voice.
© Copyright 2000 Angela King - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-05-2000 05:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Seaangel! Especially the ending!



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hoot_owl_rn
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One word...lovely  
Martie
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3 posted 01-05-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You have created quite a mood in just a few words--very well done, I say.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
caroline
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4 posted 01-05-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Absolutely gorgeous  

A house full of talent you have over there, don't you!      


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


 
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