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Kevin Taylor
Member

since 1999-12-23

Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada

0 posted 2000-01-05 03:08 PM

Let me rest amongst these lichened souls that
stand where once trees stood sleeping
sway against the northern night.
Let my greens break into blacky-blues and dragonflies
and the sounds of beetle truth remind me of the rings I grew
before the long sigh and when the shamble rains began.
Let me rest a while and breathe amongst the salmonberry
and the tumblewood of cotton, ash and hemlock, fir and cedar.
And let the sounds of winds and trees tip-talking
across the sky reawaken me from sleep in sapling dress and
new reach.

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Kevin

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Seaangel
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

1 posted 2000-01-05 04:26 PM

Beautiful, Kevin, you have a lot of talent to be seen here. I really like your imagery.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-01-05 04:45 PM

Wow...what imagery

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

3 posted 2000-01-05 04:47 PM

Nice work.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-01-05 05:18 PM

Very nice, Kevin! What imagery!

Denise

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

5 posted 2000-01-06 10:48 PM

Well Kevin you've done it again,you do it so well,your talent is so far beyond my own,
yet it inspires me to continue and develop.
  It's an honor to be in the same forum as you.
            Sincerely,
                 paul

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2000-01-06 10:53 PM

I like this a lot, Kevin - particularly the "sapling reach".....

Deborah
Junior Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 41

7 posted 2000-01-06 11:13 PM

I love this poem. The subject is great and the description and images you painted wonderful. Nature is one of the beauties of the world.
Deborah

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Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2000-01-06 11:16 PM

Excellent poem, Kevin. Good words and phases, well applied.

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