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Dreamer_556
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0 posted 01-05-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for Dreamer_556   Email Dreamer_556   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dreamer_556

Confrontation

The sorrow that I feel is deeper than the darkest ocean.
The questions I need answered are higher than the highest mountain.
My imagination runs wild, playing tricks with my mind.
I sense things that I cannot see, making me quiver with fear.
Dark images formed in my head project on every corner.

Hes chasing after me like an evil creature of the night.
Running fast, I am reaching dead ends; soon I will be confronted.
Loud shouts, clumsy footsteps echo treacherously around me.
I know I am guilty, I know I cannot hide forever.
Yet I shall keep running, until one day I am found by him.

Please let me know what you think, and any ways I can improve this! I am proud to say - this is now my second piece!  

~*Dreamer*~


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Denise
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1 posted 01-05-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I am not a poetry critic, Dreamer, but I think this is magnificent! Wow..your second poem! You sure are talented!  

 Denise

Corinne
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Another good one, Dreamer!  Just hope you really arent being chased by this mysterious something!

Corinne
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Your poem is almost a reflection of my thoughts, and so holds a great respect in my mind.  
Dreamer_556
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4 posted 01-06-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for Dreamer_556   Email Dreamer_556   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dreamer_556

Thank you, yet again, for replying!

Corinne.. I think the mysterious 'something' I am running from is my conscience !!

Denise, thank you very much for that kind comment! I find it very hard for people to take me seriously due to my age, so thank you ALL very much.

Kid Pedestal, I hope you are made to feel as welcome as I was!
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