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Animosity

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simplyYRREHS
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0 posted 01-05-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for simplyYRREHS

The wedding ring you gave to me
So many moons ago
Is broken now, as is the vow
Leaves nothing to follow

To mend the heart is so obscure
As is to fix a dream
But moving on and being strong-
Not easy as it seems

This substance you have left with me
Poisons my aching core
My hate for you, still brand new
Killing love that was before




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J.B.SR
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1 posted 01-05-2000 03:09 PM       View Profile for J.B.SR   Email J.B.SR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for J.B.SR

I can see that your still feeling the pain that comes with all that you`ve been thru?
I wish there were something I could say to take it all away.Your a sweety and things will get better.Good job Sherry  
Me

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John Foulstone
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2 posted 01-06-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for John Foulstone   Email John Foulstone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for John Foulstone

Hi, Sherry. How's that line go: "Our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought". Then, sometime when you least expect it, something absolutely wonderful will happen. Meantime, keep turning that sadness into sweet thoughts.

 It's never too late to have a happy childhood ...
 
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