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Meadowmuse
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0 posted 2000-01-05 08:56 AM


In the Finding

Watching you as you watch me
both of us
enjoying the unstill,
suspended moments
between thought,
word, action,
question, response.
Intoxicated,
inebriated
with the resonance
of our
pounding,
ever mounting
abyss.

Fanned flames licking,
lingering,
flickering
with this dazzling dance.
Broiling veins full,
willing,
to touch,
to take this chosen chance,
as your moistened moans announce,
you have found, fully,
euphoria,
in the surrounding,
silent soundings
of my
kiss.

Dear LadyClaire


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Mike
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1 posted 2000-01-05 09:53 AM


OMG!!!
Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-05 10:10 AM


Ditto! Great poem, Claire! So passionate!

 Denise


hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-01-05 01:43 PM


Whooo Hoooo....me did like this one, uh hu, yep....speachless here  
Dreamer_556
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4 posted 2000-01-05 02:12 PM


I particularly love the way it flows.
Great use of words!

~*Dreamer*~

Tamera
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5 posted 2000-01-05 02:19 PM


Passionate indeed! I liked it!
Tamera

Meadowmuse
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6 posted 2000-01-05 07:03 PM


Mike...I'm sorry...hope I didn't offend you. (or anyone else)
Denise, Hoot Owl, Dreamer, Tamera, thank you all for your comments.

Dear LadyClaire

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2000-01-07 06:44 PM


In the looking, I just found "In the Finding". I miss so many great poems it seems, and here is one.
Very sensuous, my friend
I loved this!
Liz

Meadowmuse
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8 posted 2000-01-09 12:56 PM


Thank you, Liz, for your sweet comment. So glad you "found" it (and enjoyed it!)

Dear LadyClaire

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-01-09 02:39 PM


The imagery of two suspended
in the throes of discovery ...
exquisite.  Just exquisite.
Very, very nice, Claire.
~*Marge*~

Meadowmuse
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10 posted 2000-01-10 02:14 AM


Thank you, Marge...so nice of you to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Yes, the throes of discovery...poetry in and of itself, is it not?

Dear LadyClaire

devina
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11 posted 2000-01-10 06:18 AM


Spice this one up a bit more and you'd be thrown into the adult forum little missy!!!LOL...This was a very passionate poem, I felt it the entire time!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Parker
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12 posted 2000-01-10 12:40 PM


If things get any hotter than this In the Adult forum, I should be heading there.
You are a wonderful weaver, I must seek out the rest of thy poems.

Parker....

Severn
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13 posted 2000-01-10 06:44 PM


Wow wow wow - freeverse at its finest ...excellent!
Meadowmuse
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14 posted 2000-01-10 10:05 PM


Devina, I hope it was alright posting it here. I've never been to the Adult Forum, as I wasn't sure I would qualify. *g* Thank you for your kind comment.

Parker, thank you for your gracious words ...there is much to be woven into the tapestry of one's life.

Severn, thanks for the enthusiasm...glad you liked this.

Dear LadyClaire



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