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In the Finding

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Meadowmuse
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In the Finding

Watching you as you watch me
both of us
enjoying the unstill,
suspended moments
between thought,
word, action,
question, response.
Intoxicated,
inebriated
with the resonance
of our
pounding,
ever mounting
abyss.

Fanned flames licking,
lingering,
flickering
with this dazzling dance.
Broiling veins full,
willing,
to touch,
to take this chosen chance,
as your moistened moans announce,
you have found, fully,
euphoria,
in the surrounding,
silent soundings
of my
kiss.

Dear LadyClaire

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Mike
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1 posted 01-05-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

OMG!!!
Denise
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2 posted 01-05-2000 10:10 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ditto! Great poem, Claire! So passionate!

 Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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Whooo Hoooo....me did like this one, uh hu, yep....speachless here  
Dreamer_556
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4 posted 01-05-2000 02:12 PM       View Profile for Dreamer_556   Email Dreamer_556   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dreamer_556

I particularly love the way it flows.
Great use of words!

~*Dreamer*~
Tamera
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Passionate indeed! I liked it!
Tamera
Meadowmuse
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6 posted 01-05-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Mike...I'm sorry...hope I didn't offend you. (or anyone else)
Denise, Hoot Owl, Dreamer, Tamera, thank you all for your comments.

Dear LadyClaire
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 01-07-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

In the looking, I just found "In the Finding". I miss so many great poems it seems, and here is one.
Very sensuous, my friend
I loved this!
Liz
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8 posted 01-09-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Thank you, Liz, for your sweet comment. So glad you "found" it (and enjoyed it!)

Dear LadyClaire
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 01-09-2000 02:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

The imagery of two suspended
in the throes of discovery ...
exquisite.  Just exquisite.
Very, very nice, Claire.
~*Marge*~
Meadowmuse
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Thank you, Marge...so nice of you to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Yes, the throes of discovery...poetry in and of itself, is it not?

Dear LadyClaire
devina
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Spice this one up a bit more and you'd be thrown into the adult forum little missy!!!LOL...This was a very passionate poem, I felt it the entire time!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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If things get any hotter than this In the Adult forum, I should be heading there.
You are a wonderful weaver, I must seek out the rest of thy poems.

Parker....
Severn
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Wow wow wow - freeverse at its finest ...excellent!
Meadowmuse
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Devina, I hope it was alright posting it here. I've never been to the Adult Forum, as I wasn't sure I would qualify. *g* Thank you for your kind comment.

Parker, thank you for your gracious words ...there is much to be woven into the tapestry of one's life.

Severn, thanks for the enthusiasm...glad you liked this.

Dear LadyClaire


 
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