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J.B.SR
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0 posted 01-05-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for J.B.SR   Email J.B.SR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for J.B.SR





[This message has been edited by J.B.SR (edited 01-08-2000).]
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J.B.SR
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1 posted 01-05-2000 03:42 AM       View Profile for J.B.SR   Email J.B.SR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for J.B.SR

Im guessing this is one of them that i should
have kept between me and the one i wrote it for? Im new at this,sorry.
whiskey
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2 posted 01-05-2000 03:52 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks for sharing and No we love to read about the love you feel god most of my poems are about the same subject as this one so keep posting   Great poem
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-05-2000 05:27 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very heart felt words...there is no greater distance than that that lays between two hearts.
Denise
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4 posted 01-05-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, this is so beautiful! Of course you shouldn't have kept it to yourself! Thanks for sharing it!  

 Denise

simplyYRREHS
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5 posted 01-05-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

speechless.

beautiful.

moving.

true.

sherry
J.B.SR
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6 posted 01-05-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for J.B.SR   Email J.B.SR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for J.B.SR

Thank you for the input.I hope this poem will let her know just how special she really is to me and all that know her  
Nate Dogg
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7 posted 01-05-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I loved that poem J.B. In fact, I might write a poem called distant lover. That's also the name of one Marvin Gaye's songs. And I love that song too!

 Nathan
Jer
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8 posted 01-05-2000 08:21 PM       View Profile for Jer   Email Jer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jer

Great writing!  I know what your talking about though. Thanks for sharing!
Mary
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9 posted 01-05-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Mary   Email Mary   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mary

Great poem J.B.SR...I'm glad you decided to share this!  It's simply beautiful!!
J.B.SR
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10 posted 01-07-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for J.B.SR   Email J.B.SR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for J.B.SR

Sorry to bring back to the front,but i have a question.How is it that someone can come
and change the name of my writings?
I had named this "Distant Love" and some how
someone has changed the name to
"Distant Lover".
Who ever has done this,please dont take it upon your self to adjust others work to fit your needs or likings.thank you

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Dark Angel
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11 posted 01-07-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is beautiful J.B.SR I can relate to this, beautifully written.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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