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whiskey
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0 posted 01-05-2000 02:25 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Day dream "

Sky blue
Clouds white
Laying here
Under air
Seeing smile
Laughter heard
Birds fly
Over head
Sun shines
Warm skin
Glowing cheeks
Grass soft
Under skin
Heart sings
From within
Hair Bright
Face smooth
Soft lips
Upon mine
Given yours
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Severn
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1 posted 01-05-2000 02:30 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

very very sweet, Whiskey - I like it!

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
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2 posted 01-05-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Methinks this verse likes me. Tranquility strikes me in it.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ
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because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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3 posted 01-05-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

Whiskey,
   You know that I love you.  The poem is very good, but don't you think that the subject matter is a little to much for everyone here?  I look forward to you being able to show me were this place is!!
First__Knight
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4 posted 01-05-2000 02:51 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

What a picture I see here.....wow  

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


wayoutwalt
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5 posted 01-05-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

what are you trying to say highwayman!
whiskey
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Thanks everyone for your kind replies  

Highwayman, I love you too your so clever for guessing the suject matter but then you know me well  
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7 posted 01-05-2000 03:12 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

OKay as it has been pointed out to me my last comment looks a bit strange.....I mean is I see the picture from the Poem in the words......I was not refering to your personal picture Whiskey and Sorry for any misunderstanding that may have happened...LOL  But I would never be so bold anyway :0)

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


whiskey
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First Knight you got it all wrong I didnt take any offense to your reply there was nothing wrong with it  



[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-05-2000).]
Denise
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WOW! You do paint a lovely picture here! I absolutely love it!  


(p.s. I didn't misunderstand your first comment, First Knight)

 Denise

 
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