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sweetest sunset

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candace
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0 posted 01-05-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for candace   Email candace   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for candace

glistening water drops,
drizzle deep beneath my soul

mystical memoirs of colors,
shattering the dark light

vividly speaking,
he walks closer to me

glancing in my direction,
causing a motion of satisfaction

softness of his kiss,
wetness of his embrace

quivering insanity,
echoing,defiantly within

touch of his hand,
slowly shadowing my face

the longest touch,
the sweetest embrace


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1 posted 01-05-2000 03:57 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

wonderful poem  
Deborah
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2 posted 01-05-2000 09:34 AM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

You created wonderful images.  I especially like the first 4 lines.  
       Deborah
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Yes, you definitely painted a lovely picture! Beautiful!

 Denise

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Candace,
That poem is awesome.
jf
Marie777
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5 posted 01-30-2007 01:37 AM       View Profile for Marie777   Email Marie777   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marie777

Great work!!

Hugs,
Marie

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