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neitham
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 42
India

0 posted 2000-01-05 12:22 PM


Of the first kiss,  
                          the sweetest kiss it was.  

Of innocence, so pure,  
                         lingers on the mind for long.  

Two hearts meet as one,  
                         together will they be evermore.  

Memories woven in warmth and cares,  
                          bring back smiles on fond thoughts.  

How swift does time passes by,  
                          how often does the season changes.  

Many leaves the tree does shed,  
                          many flower does blooms and fades.  

Sweet memories of you but remain always,  
                          if only to give me much hope and promises.  

For, you were once my sweetheart,  
                          and you were my first love and only love!.  
  


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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 2000-01-05 12:44 PM


Oh, there's nothing like that first love, that first kiss.....hmmmm, dreamy quality to this one  
devina
Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
2 posted 2000-01-05 12:51 PM


Oh sigh...this reminds me of my first love, and first everything for that matter! he he...If only love could always be as simple and undemanding as it is the first time around!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-05 10:46 AM


Yep, that just about describes it! Great poem!

 Denise


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