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Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
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0 posted 2000-01-04 11:39 PM




I don't feel wanted like a MOM
I don't feel useful like a DAD
NOT being wanted is as scary as death
I feel alone, confused and out of breath

Today was strangely different
I felt common like a peasent

I miss myself and what I was about
I'm lost, lonely and I feel left out
I really don't like myself or who I am
Where am I.....My only friend




 



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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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1 posted 2000-01-05 12:09 PM


Wow - this is really sad, I hope you don't feel like this still. Very good I think!



 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 2000-01-05 11:09 AM


Very sad...I hope you feel better about yourself now!

 Denise


simplyYRREHS
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 162

3 posted 2000-01-05 11:11 AM


What a contrast with "All I Am"...

Nice to see where work has come from...and where it has arrived!

Sherry

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