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Michael
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0 posted 01-04-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

TWO WORLDS

I felt it from California.
You felt it in Tennessee.
Electric air, a tingling there,
Connecting you and me.

Though I was quite impulsive,
While you, a bit reserved.
Both slept sound in a Playground
Of Dream so well preserved.

A world where we found it safe
For feelings to be shared.
Night by night you held me tight,
To show me how you cared.

Counting falling stars from heaven,
Dancing across the clouds with you.
My Angel, bright, in purest white,
You are my wish come true.

Day by day we've made our way
Through encumbered reality.
To hold August though love and trust
A vision of shared destiny.

And what once seemed so far away,
Now seems so very near.
As my soul but cries, to see your eyes
For the first time, a joyous tear.

For two worlds are becoming one,
And there, two hearts will sing.
As spiritual meets physical,
Bonded by vow and ring.

Yes, Gennifer, your wish is mine,
A dream to share for life.
Ever so true, offer "I do",
My hand to you, my wife.


Michael Anderson

I married you in my heart long ago, Gennifer.  I will do so in ceremony soon.  I love you.




[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 01-04-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
Bojopy
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1 posted 01-04-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

Micheal this should be read at the wedding it was beautiful!!!!!! Thanks for sharing your love for her with us

 


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2 posted 01-04-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

What can I possibly say to do this beautiful poem justice....?  You sure have a way of blowing mine out of the water babe....Now I'll have to go back and try again, for mine appears "blah" now...  
This touched me in a way you'll never know...well, maybe you will.  After we've spent a few years together...then you'll know.   In about 24 days, I'm going to take you in my arms, and probably not let go the whole week we're together....prepare yourself for that.  LOL  I think I'm going to back you up to the nearest wall, and not let you come up for air for at least the first 3-4 days.....Not a moment wasted.  I sure love you.  If this isn't the real thing, I think I'm tossing in the towel on finding true love.  If I don't find it in you, it doesn't exist in my opinion....so why waste time looking further?  Here's to our future!  (lifting glass to toast!)  hehe  I feel like I'm counting down to another Millennium celebration!  ROFL  24 days to go!!!    


 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
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Here's to your future..... ENJOY
Martie
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4 posted 01-04-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

How wonderful love is and what a beautiful expression Michael.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
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Beautiful!  
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 01-04-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Michael,
A wonderful poem, bless you both and may happiness be with you both always. Sy
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7 posted 01-04-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, I may be imagining things but this sounds like it's getting serious  

Great job, Michael.
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Michael this was beautiful, maybe you should read it as your wedding vow?  The count down begins....24 days to go...I hope you guys have a great time...well, I know ya will!
Bless ya both!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


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OH *Big sigh* this is so beautiful and words can not express how happy I am for the two of you. Michael, well written poem and best of luck.
Gennifer...nice reply, I hope all your dreams come true...oh, BTW I love your signature  
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10 posted 01-05-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Woooow!

have a great time, life - and thanks for sharing it here guys.

Awesome poem.

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
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11 posted 01-05-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Congratulations, not long now, how wonderful for you both.  All my love and blessings for a wonderous future together..  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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They've said it all, maybe MAGNIFICENT!
Denise
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Beautiful!

 Denise

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I just have one question for ya Micheal, where in the world are you two gonna find a book BIG enough for your poems to each other? I think I'll start cutting down trees as we speak- in preperation for an early wedding present! Yet another love filled beauty!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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woah woopity scoob awb wow!! very nice yuh and lucky girl yuh yuh
Michael
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Just want to say thank for all the replies.  Gen and I have spoken about exchanging personal vows if and when we do get married, I'm sure they ring close to this.

Good observation, Balladeer...just a little.

Devina, yeah, I got a pretty thick stack already.  Definately gonna be a thick one.  If you's like a sneak preview, I have a section on my home page devoted to nothing but poetry Gen and I have written for each other.  


Michael
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Well, I guess we won't see Michael and Jennifer's postings for at least 3 or 4 days.
They'll be making poetry of their own.
Good luck and best wishes to you both
Liz
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Beautiful poem, Michael... may your meeting be even better than you hope!
lostboy
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Wonderful sentiment Michael, best of luck to both of you. Wishing you much happiness!!
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I think you two need to get a room!  

Very nice work Micheal.  It's so nice to see a balanced relationship.

BTW pFF.. the reason I can speak hick is cuz iuz raized in Tennuhssay.  
 
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