»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #5
»
Still
| Open Poetry #5 |
|
Still |
|
|
simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Still Bittersweet The memory As down the path I trod Begging thee Deliver me! Is all I ask of God Trifiling Deciphering Of words so harshly spent One askew Mere thought of you My pain seems infinate Placidness Emotionless This being I've become Heart is still Against all will It finally succombs [This message has been edited by simplyYRREHS (edited 01-04-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Sherry - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Wonderful Sherry!!!!! I loved it in all it's deepness towards GOD. Am I right about that? |
||
|
simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Bojopy... Again, the "neat" thing about these writings-each seems to take on meaning relevent to the reader's needs...or interests. I can see, how this could be interpreted as a deep thing about God, but actually, was not. Don't get me wrong, there is mention of God in the poem, but simply as a plea for closure to a very painful memory. I think I like my writing through your eyes- always nice to have a different view on how thoughts are perceived. Thanks for the question and compliment! Sherry |
||
|
J.B.SR Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 29Seattle area |
Sherry,i see that once again you have shown another of your hidden talents.Im alaways amazed by the little things that i learn from and about you. Your friend Joel  [This message has been edited by J.B.SR (edited 01-05-2000).] |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful piece, Sherry! Denise |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The format you used with this worked very well in helping to display the emotions. Nicely done |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
