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All I AM

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Bojopy
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0 posted 01-04-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bojopy



This took me a long time to type so please read it. thank you

             "All I AM"

All I am is not all I'll ever be
I'm improving daily with no end I see
Month by month I travel beyond myself
I am creating not only money but a different wealth

All I am is not all I'll ever be
I'm learning somthing new today just for me
Month to month I plan for the next
I am not all I am and I'm not complex

All I am is not all I'll ever be
I'm creating qualities to have as a key
Month after month I get older but never old
I am full of life and what it may hold

All I am is not all I'll ever be
I'm freeing myself of all lifes greed
Months & months in the past this brought me down
I am now free of letting someone control my frowns

All I am is not all I'll ever be
I am leading the way to always being happy
Month by month check yourself and where your at
I am going to too just so I never go back

All I am is not all I'll ever be
I'm everything If I let myself free
Month to month I will explore somthing new
I am in love with me and I hope not of only few

All I am is not all I'll ever be
I'm caring about others by knowing me
Month after month I'll be closer to new love bounds
I am not worried there out there they will be found

All I am is not all I'll ever be
I'm feeling and it finally agrees
Months & months I've wanted to strive
I am NOW that someone who knows they are ALIVE!!!!!!


 







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Bojopy
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1 posted 01-04-2000 09:58 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

I'm responding this myself to keep it on top to make sure it gets read.  I always seem to read the top one's myself and this is my last one for the night. thank you

 


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2 posted 01-04-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Full of passion and hope, such good things they are, as is this poem.
Marilyn
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3 posted 01-04-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

We are all evolving on a daily basis. It is good that you know this and that you watch as you change. Enjoy the evolution.
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4 posted 01-04-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Bojopy...

Very uplifting read, especially for someone into self-excavation (   ).  Neat thing about this writing- can manipulate it to suit what you want it to read. I always said "I couldn't give all of me unless I HAD all of me".  Your poem certainly brought that philosophy of mine into the forefront.  

Right on!  Great to read something encompassing so much enthusiasm.

Sherry
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5 posted 01-04-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

Thank you for all the responses. It is not my normal writing but I thought it would be uplifting for all readers such as myself who are somtimes depressed........Thanks again
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6 posted 01-05-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! This is wonderful! Very well done, great thoughts!

 Denise

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