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Kid Pedestal
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0 posted 01-04-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Kid Pedestal   Email Kid Pedestal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kid Pedestal's Home Page   View IP for Kid Pedestal

In the stillness of life, time moves by with
The fluidity of death.
Where the soul rupturing hand, which embraces
Ones richest emotions,
Is the same hand, which destroys them.

Twisting the mind of his child-like-thoughts
And burning through is intuitive nature,
I remain calm.
I remain stable while the world creates turmoil
Around me….
And I just push it aside
And live.

© Copyright 2000 Adam Newberg - All Rights Reserved
Bojopy
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1 posted 01-04-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

great poem and welcome to passionate

 


whiskey
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2 posted 01-04-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful poem Welcome to passions  
Poet deVine
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3 posted 01-04-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I liked this one!
Marilyn
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Welcome to Passions.   Your words hold much truth. Thankyou for sharing them with us. I hope to see more of your work in the future.
Deborah
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5 posted 01-04-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

Nice poem, you are lucky that you can push your way out of the turmoil, I always end up embracing the confusion and pain.  I think it must be in my nature.  Well writen poem, can't wait to hear more by you.
       Deborah
Severn
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6 posted 01-05-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Welcome to Passions - and what a powerful piece!

    

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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7 posted 01-05-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Powerful, well stated, good flow...I'm definately looking forward to reading more.
Welcome to passions  
Paul Hoekman
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WRITE ON ! ! !
    welcome,
          Paul
Denise
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9 posted 01-05-2000 09:55 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Kid! I, too, enjoyed this!

 Denise

 
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