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agony
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Back behind these bars,totally made of steel,I can't quite
describe how having no freedom feels.
It is a kind of loneliness that lives wiyhin your mind.Depriving you from loved ones that was once so hard to find.
You think of all the wrong you did as you lay awake at night.
You want to come to terms with
yourself so you can try to make everythng alright.You want to know what it is all about within your heart and soul.
So you accept the lord into your life and it makes your body whole.
Noe you feel better as you arestudying his book. If you want to feel this feeling,just open it,read and look.He won't deny not one of us as he loves us all the same.He want's what is best for all of us and e definetely plays no games.
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Tracy Schlieper

 
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1 posted 01-04-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I couldn't have thought of a better title for this! Reality says it all!  Wonderful piece, agony!

 Denise

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Very true words   )
LOL...okay who changed the smileys, I don't smoke!!!

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