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Believe in the rainbows that shape all our dreams

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 01-04-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Believe in the rainbows that shape all our dreams
as they dance across the magic of our souls
creating light where shadows once existed
to fill with wonder what was once an empty hole

As icicles drip off the branches of a tree
so we're free to roam our hidden fantasies
shaken free by the winds across the heart
these are the colours of ecstacy

Scattered like leaves as they blow across time
these colours are our innocent friends
delight in them with knowledge of eternal hope
weaving dreams that have no beginning and no end

Drape your soul with this magical shawl
release your spirit with opened curtains
let timeless passion create a wonderful glow
ending the darkness of a future uncertain

The depth of feeling is yours to conceive
as you hold the future of destiny
within the folds of two loving hearts
that soothe the soul with their rhapsody

I wonder if you will ever realise
That it's not as far as it may seem
I wonder if you'll reach out and touch
The rainbow of an everlasting dream...


 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.





[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-04-2000).]
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-04-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Rainbow, You have touched upon that which I have felt in you and your poetry and your spirit. This is very beautifully written, Rainbow, and I'm sure most poets will understand all you have said here. Thank you for being able to express it.
Love ya,
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 01-04-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RG,
Beautiful poem, well written and I enjoyed the read. *L* Sy
Denise
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3 posted 01-04-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is special, Cindy, and so are you! Great poem!

 Denise

agony
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4 posted 01-04-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for agony   Email agony   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for agony

Thank you very much for changing the format.I am still new at doing all this by computer.Very nice poem if I might add.

 
Balladeer
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5 posted 01-04-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

"The rainbow of an everlasting dream.." such a wonderful line. The poem's beauty is surpassed only by your own, Rainbow, come what may.
Local Rebel
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6 posted 01-04-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

A spectrum of inspiration RG!  

HuggsZ!
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7 posted 01-04-2000 07:39 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is your best ever! Please submit it to the main site! PLEASE! I love it..
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 01-04-2000 08:06 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Elizabeth: You have a way of reading me, whether I write what I feel or just feel it..  

HUGS

SY: You're just a loveable softie...  

HUGS

Denise: I look at the photographs of your daughter's wedding and know you mean what you say..  

HUGS

Agony: Gosh, I was feeling a bit worried about doing that...never done it before but it's such a heartfelt poem...good luck!

HUGS

Bal: In another lifetime, right now you could make me feel like a princess, in another lifetime!

HUSG

LR: Kaleidescope....certainly..  

HUSG

PDV: It's too personal but thank you..

HUSG

Thanks for your hand..

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-05-2000).]
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9 posted 01-04-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

Enjoyed this poem....well said and written....it was as if I was listening to you read it........Bojopy

 


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I believe in the Rainbow that has
draped across my heart....
Beautiful R G ....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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11 posted 01-04-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

Wonderful poem, as the others have said.  Loved reading it.
   Deborah
Martie
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12 posted 01-04-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is very beautiful Rainbow--I keep going back to read it again and find it so very well done.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 01-05-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh my...
"I wonder if you will ever realise
That it's not as far as it may seem
I wonder if you'll reach out and touch
The rainbow of an everlasting dream..."
How very, very beautiful  
Severn
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14 posted 01-05-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

How heartwarming...and beautiful RG.

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
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15 posted 01-05-2000 10:23 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well, I read this yesterday and it made me cry, and I went back to read it again today and it made me cry again....gosh RG were you writing this for me....sure seems like it...and yep I agree with hoot that last verse is precious.....sighs and hugs

and am glad I came to read again today cause my comment of yesterday is not here...musta done something wrong, lol, I had to take off letting PIP keep my password, as anyone can open my cp, and sometimes I forget to put it in on a comment and it doesn't post...and lol, yes I know if I wasn't so pressed for time and I actually read the screens it would probably tell me that it didn't post but lol, I am off to the next poem in a flash, otherwise I won't get to read them....big hugs for your day RG
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16 posted 01-05-2000 10:28 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Don't believe Lovey's excuses... we all know that hair keeps blocking her view! LOL

This is beautiful, RG... well done!!!
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17 posted 01-05-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thank you for all your responses..

Pepper: You're beautiful  HUSG

Hoot, Dreams are funny things, you can choose the ending, unlike life.. HUSG

Iloveit: You're as soppy as I am..   HUSG

Suthern: ROFL@Hair..*g*  HUSG

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

neitham
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18 posted 01-06-2000 03:15 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

RG:
What a poem, what flow in expression WOW! You weave your way into my heart with those beautful words. Been trying to write something like this, alas I could not manage even a semblance of it. Am not giving up though  

admiringly,
neitham
Dark Angel
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19 posted 01-06-2000 03:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Cindy, this poem is beautiful, as you are inside and out, I especially love the line "The Rainbow of an everlasting dream"  Beautiful!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Nan
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20 posted 01-06-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Aren't rainbows just the most splendiferous thing? I hear that angels ride upon their crests.....
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21 posted 01-06-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Rainbowgirl,
I am in complete agreement...wonderful!
Tamera
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22 posted 01-06-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

"I wonder if you will ever realise it's not as far as it may seem". Such heartfelt poetry. I keep coming back to it. Thank you
RainbowGirl. very wonderful indeed.


 B Gravitt


 
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