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My Hraet Belongs To You

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agony
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0 posted 01-04-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for agony   Email agony   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for agony



For the first time in my life I feel happy inside.My eyes are
full of love and I feel no need
to hide.
My love for you is growing each and every day,the love that you have given me,I could never throw
that away.
So many people have tried to break this will of mine,so many nights, I have cried,then said
"I am just fine."
I watched as others played their games and lied about their love,your truth and honesty rang
out from above.
My heart belongs to you,mylove will never leave,let's make this last forever,and it will if you just believe.

BY
Tracy Schlieper

 
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1 posted 01-04-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

For the first time in my life
I feel happy inside
My eyes are full of love
and I feel no need to hide
My love for you is growing
each and every day
the love that you have given me
I could never throw away
So many people have tried
to break this will of mine
so many nights, I have cried,
then said "I am just fine."
I watched as others played their games
and lied about their love
your truth and honesty
rang out from above
My heart belongs to you
my love will never leave
let's make this last forever
and it will

if you just believe...

BY
Tracy Schlieper

I hope you don't mind Tracy, I read this and thought it was lovely but changed the formatting slightly...

HUSG


Moderators please delete this if Tracy is unhappy with it...



 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

Denise
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2 posted 01-04-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This format makes it much easier to read!

 Denise

Poet deVine
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3 posted 01-04-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Tracy, your poem is lovely, but RG has a point...sometimes formatting can really help a poem...If you are unhappy with this, let me know....we're all family here and as such, we like to help out...(now if someone would just come over and do my ironing!) LOL Welcome to the family...
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 01-04-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful poem, take heed from RG though, presentation is everything  
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