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A dreamers life

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Seymour Tabin
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        A dreamers life

In good and bad aesthetic rife,
I welcomed her into my life.
To have and hold in verse and rhyme,
To cherish her throughout all time.

To keep her snug in grace and charm,
And never ever do her harm.
To walk with her within the hours,
And share with her all things as ours.

I've held her kindly in a fashion,
Gave to her aesthetic passion.
Housed her in my ivory tower,
In my garden filled with flower.

And never ever wondered far,
Took her with me to the stars.
Held her in my wild esteem,
Were critical has no mean.

Brushed in secret Aladins lamp.
Walk with her a rainbows ramp.
I did all these things in soar,
Bonded with her forever more.

But Demesne has hung my head,
Does she the will, for a dreamers bed.
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-04-2000 06:04 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
Seems are seems and dreams are dreams
And both are poetry, it seems
And this one's dreamy, I would say
And seems to dream the day away
And it is quite beautiful, Sy
Love ya,
Liz
Meadowmuse
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2 posted 01-04-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Enchanting. What better place to share a dreamer's dreams?

Dear LadyClaire

Seymour Tabin
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Elizabeth,
Dreams are seems and seems are dreams
It's almost like eating ice cream.
Love Sy
Meadow,
Enchanting has a nice ring to it, thank you.
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 01-04-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Sey, you sure know how to be romantic (when you want to be!)  LOL  *Enchanting* is a nice word for this.....magically so!   You have such a way with exposing the Romeo inside you....!  

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
whiskey
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5 posted 01-04-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Sy, Wonderful poem, Dreamy and beautiful  
Marilyn
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Lovely Symour. Dreamers are for dreamers, may we never stop.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 01-04-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

PFF,
Glad you found it enchanting and magical,very
nice comments. *L* sy
Whiskey,
Thank you for the dreamy and beautiful.
Marilyn,
Lovely, is very nice for dreamers.
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8 posted 01-04-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So very beautiful....

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


hoot_owl_rn
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Oh my, this one really touches the heart. Beautiful word Sy, I think I have to rate this amoung my favorites of yours, but I do have so many of those  
Seymour Tabin
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Alwye,
Thank you for the beautiful.
Hoot,
Thank you for the beautiful comment. *L* Sy
Denise
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Soooooo dreamy!  

 Denise

 
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