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lostboy
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0 posted 2000-01-04 01:39 PM


If I had to leave this world tomorrow
I know what my last thought would be
Though my life was now over
There's not a luckier man than me

To have had the love of one like you
A greater treasure can't be found
Been in the company of an Angel
Though I'm just now Heaven bound

If my life flashed before my eyes
Ascending all those bright white stairs
I'd see all the love you gave me
And all that we both shared
If I had the choice to start again
Be sent to any time or space
I'd come back to you, my one true love
'Cause you're my favorite place

© Copyright 2000 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 2000-01-04 01:58 PM


Great poem! Isn't it funny how our favorite place isn't really a place at all... just in the company of a certain person... for where they are isn't just home, it's heaven? *S*


[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 01-04-2000).]

Dreamer_556
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2 posted 2000-01-04 02:11 PM


That is such a great poem!

I agree with suthern... it is strange as to how a person's favourite place is actually in another.

~*Dreamer*~

jaxjoy
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3 posted 2000-01-04 03:45 PM


How sweet this is!  
lostboy
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4 posted 2000-01-04 04:03 PM


Thanks for your encouraging words.
Much obliged!!

Denise
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5 posted 2000-01-04 05:08 PM


Ahhhh, this is so sweet and tender! I love it!

 Denise


Justa Nobody
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6 posted 2000-01-04 05:54 PM


Lostboy, Great poem.  
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2000-01-04 11:48 PM


Lostboy, you haven't been around much as of late, this is wonderful, love the emotions in ti  
Severn
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8 posted 2000-01-05 12:12 PM


Very very nice LB, well done.



 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath

danni
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9 posted 2000-01-05 01:58 AM


So this is where you've been hiding. I've been looking all over for a poem of yours. I was starting to go through withdrwal.    And what a treasue I have found. This is beautiful.
lostboy
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New Hampshire, USA
10 posted 2000-01-05 09:34 AM


Denise, thanks for the sweet reply
Justa, glad you liked
Ruth, thanks, I'll be around more
Kamla, enjoy your work just as much
danni, what can I say, you know! thanks

passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-08-16 12:41 PM


sweet
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