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lostboy
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0 posted 01-04-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lostboy

If I had to leave this world tomorrow
I know what my last thought would be
Though my life was now over
There's not a luckier man than me

To have had the love of one like you
A greater treasure can't be found
Been in the company of an Angel
Though I'm just now Heaven bound

If my life flashed before my eyes
Ascending all those bright white stairs
I'd see all the love you gave me
And all that we both shared
If I had the choice to start again
Be sent to any time or space
I'd come back to you, my one true love
'Cause you're my favorite place
© Copyright 2000 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 01-04-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Great poem! Isn't it funny how our favorite place isn't really a place at all... just in the company of a certain person... for where they are isn't just home, it's heaven? *S*


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Dreamer_556
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2 posted 01-04-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Dreamer_556   Email Dreamer_556   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dreamer_556

That is such a great poem!

I agree with suthern... it is strange as to how a person's favourite place is actually in another.

~*Dreamer*~
jaxjoy
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3 posted 01-04-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jaxjoy

How sweet this is!  
lostboy
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4 posted 01-04-2000 04:03 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Thanks for your encouraging words.
Much obliged!!
Denise
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5 posted 01-04-2000 05:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhhh, this is so sweet and tender! I love it!

 Denise

Justa Nobody
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6 posted 01-04-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for Justa Nobody   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Justa Nobody

Lostboy, Great poem.  
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 01-04-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lostboy, you haven't been around much as of late, this is wonderful, love the emotions in ti  
Severn
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8 posted 01-05-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very very nice LB, well done.



 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
danni
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since 11-20-1999
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9 posted 01-05-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

So this is where you've been hiding. I've been looking all over for a poem of yours. I was starting to go through withdrwal.    And what a treasue I have found. This is beautiful.
lostboy
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10 posted 01-05-2000 09:34 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Denise, thanks for the sweet reply
Justa, glad you liked
Ruth, thanks, I'll be around more
Kamla, enjoy your work just as much
danni, what can I say, you know! thanks
passing shadows
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11 posted 08-16-2004 12:41 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

sweet
 
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