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Morning's Pull

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Meadowmuse
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Morning's Pull


The morning's pull, sweet sonnet mine,
demands us rise and stir
but for all of daylight's toil and tasks
your lingering kisses blur
into the farthest forest shades
into the nearest night
into the sounds of love we've made
and sleep's seductive sleight.

For evening wrapped us in its cloak
and bade us share each breath
with blood arising and our sighs
defying midnight's death
within our aching lover's hearts
within sweet mystery's moans
within this state of passion's grace
where eternity's seeds are sown.


Dear LadyClaire


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1 posted 01-04-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

That is so beautiful , Wonderful poem  
Meadowmuse
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2 posted 01-04-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Ah, thank you Whiskey for reading and taking time for a comment. Glad you liked it.

Dear LadyClaire


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3 posted 01-04-2000 11:40 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Very nice meadow...

and might I add what a lovely signature!
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 01-04-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Local Rebel, thank you.

Dear LadyClaire

Martie
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This is beautiful Meadow--your words are seductive and tender.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
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Beautiful!
Meadowmuse
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Martie, Suthern, thank you both for reading my work. So glad you like.


Dear LadyClaire

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Awesome!  I especially liked  the phrase
"your lingering kisses blur" Great poem!
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Superb, Claire.  It reminds me of each morning Lorelei and I share, and the lingering call of the night already spent and dying.
Meadowmuse
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jaxjoy, thank you for such an enthusiastic response.

LngJhnAg, yes, it is a rather bittersweet morningtime feeling. Thanks for the encouraging comment.


Dear LadyClaire

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Superb, sublime, fantastic, wonderful, romantic....all those words! Great poem, Claire!

 Denise

Meadowmuse
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Thank you, Denise, for such an enthusiastic response!

Dear LadyClaire

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I have to ditto all of the above  )
 
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