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whiskey
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0 posted 01-04-2000 09:51 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey


" Unknown "

Close heart
Distance long
Over sea
Under ground
Lost to me
Found to you
Inside light
Outside glow
Strong sense
Eyes slow
Mind fast
Long wind
Second skin
Love known
Soul kept
Inner you
Inner me
© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Local Rebel
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1 posted 01-04-2000 10:03 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

I think the subject is a very lucky person.

You have succinctly expressed yourself my dear.  Very efficient art.  I admire it very much.  

 How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius
Toerag
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2 posted 01-04-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Very nice!
Lovely!
Kind of erotic even!
Simply beautiful!

(and I'm just talking about your picture!)...I'll go back and read the poem now...
Paul Hoekman
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3 posted 01-04-2000 10:19 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

  EASY Toerag!!
  
   As you know this forum is awesome,
not only to share with other poets that appreciate your work (or your parents,Toerag)
but how it makes you feel alive pouring it all out here.
Another Beauty Whiskey keep on rockin girl
whiskey
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4 posted 01-04-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Rebel, Thanks it means alot to hear people say they like my poetry  

Toerag, Thanks for the compliments and I hope you liked the poem too

Paul, Thanks for all your replies and Ill keep rockin if you do , BTW did you get my email ?
Toerag
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5 posted 01-04-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Seriously, I do like the way ya wrote the poem sweetie.....and as Paul said, yep...I'm really easy sometimes....okay, most of the time....LOL.....

Now then, Paul, but...but...she emails you?....Geesch! I guess ya have a big boat?...Ya both love the sea? Or are ya handsome and suave like me?
whiskey
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6 posted 01-04-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Toerag, I email lots of people you may be next inline , if you keep giving me these compliments  
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 01-04-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Whiskey, Lovely poem, dear, and your picture is lovely, too, but only erotic in the mind of the beholder. You are beautiful and so is your poetry.
Toerag, let her alone!
Liz
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8 posted 01-04-2000 10:47 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yanno gal? I've always been a beer drinker but you could drive a man to whiskey! LOL...Are you an Aussie?....That's one place I'd truly love to visit someday....that and or New Zealand.....Hope ya had a great Holiday and keep up the poetry...you're quite good!
whiskey
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Liz, Thanks alot for the compliments I love your poetry too  

Toerag, Yes I am an aussie, And what holiday would that be ?  
Local Rebel
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10 posted 01-04-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

I see that nefarious Toe is never gonna change his ways... still scamming all the e-beauties he can...

and you are beautiful too whiskey..
Martie
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11 posted 01-04-2000 10:54 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lovely is the right word, yes very lovely.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
whiskey
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Rebel, Thanks  

You guys have me blushing  
Toerag
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13 posted 01-04-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yassee how these guys all chastize me?...Just cuz I complimented a pretty gal?...Ya notice that Paul and L.Rebel didn't say anything about how sweet, kind, good looking, and nice I am?....That's okay...cuz Balladeer loves me, and Suthern thinks I'm an okay guy....and Whiskey might email me some day......LOL
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14 posted 01-04-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Thanks, Liz... your last sentence stated my thoughts exactly... but for different (selfish, jealous *G*) reasons! LOL

Whiskey: My welcome might not be quite as enthusiastic as some have been *G*... but it's sincere! Great poem!
whiskey
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15 posted 01-04-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Hearsay dont work with me, Ill figure you out for myself  
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16 posted 01-04-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Toe: An okay guy? *G* And I would have sworn you weren't given to understatements! LOL But if you expect ME to tell a beautiful woman just how gorgeous you are or how you're the finest, most wonderful man ever created... you're in for a long wait! ROFL!
whiskey
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17 posted 01-04-2000 11:06 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Suthern, Thanks for the welcome and your kind reply  

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-04-2000).]
highwayman
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18 posted 01-04-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

I think that all of you are right.  This is one of the best she has done.  The subject in this one is a very lucky person indeed.  It is clear that he is well loved and I am very, very jealous.  Whiskey I love you, and please remember that!!!!
Bojopy
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19 posted 01-04-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

The person who inspires you..... I give great thanks too.......another great poem here..................Bojopy

 


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Simply lovely Whiskey...this is my first taste of your work and I will be looking forward to reading more...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


 
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