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Moonshine
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0 posted 01-04-2000 09:01 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

I scream into darkness,
The night swallows my words,
Noone can hear me,
Noone knows how much I hurt,
I need a safe place,
But all the doors are shut,
Not one will open for me,
Should I just give up?
And surrender myself over,
To the demons that haunt me,
Let them ravage my broken soul,
Then will they cease to torment me?
© Copyright 2000 Jen - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 01-04-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Dont ever give up, Life has so many twists and turns focus on the good things  
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 01-04-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Awwwwww Hon, you should never give up and as long as you have your passions family, you are never alone. Hang tight, things will look up.
Moonshine
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3 posted 01-05-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your reply Whiskey,
This was a poem I wrote last night - sometimes I just feel like that but I'm not giving up : )
Moonshine
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4 posted 01-05-2000 02:56 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx Hoot,
Just feeling not so great right now, I'm OK though : )
First__Knight
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5 posted 01-05-2000 03:24 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Sometimes pulling on doors and looking for the safe place...is right there before us....and as we take time to see it.....the door pushes instead of pulling....and in we go.  Glad you pushed in this door and found us.....Thank you

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


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6 posted 01-05-2000 03:36 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

i know how that feels   but you have to always move on....it would be worse if you didn't
great poem!!
Moonshine
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Thanx for your comment F_N,
I'm glad that my friend showed me PIP and the great people who come here.
Moonshine
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8 posted 01-05-2000 03:52 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your comment CrazyChick,
This poem is just how I feel sometimes. I'm OK : )
Deborah
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9 posted 01-05-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

You are never alone, there are always people who care.  Sometimes we all feel abandoned, but just remember the wonders in life.  Never give up.  
      Deborah
Moonshine
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10 posted 01-05-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your reply Deborah,
It's more a feeling than actually being alone - as I wrote to someone else in this forum: even in a sea of people it's easy to drown. I guess the poem is pretty metaphorical. It's just that something I feel every now and then and, I wrote about it. That's all.
Moonshine
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11 posted 01-05-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your reply Deborah,
It's more a feeling than actually being alone - as I wrote to someone else in this forum: even in a sea of people it's easy to drown. I guess the poem is pretty metaphorical. It's just that something I feel every now and then and, I wrote about it. That's all.
Dark Angel
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12 posted 01-06-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine Honey, remember when I said not to feel alone, cause you're not on your own, I am here for you!! "hugs" Honey! Loved the poem.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Red
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13 posted 01-06-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for Red   Email Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Red

Speaking to my soul.lol  Beautiful poem... sad, but beautiful....remember, you're never really alone unless you make yousrself that way!!!
Moonshine
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14 posted 01-06-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx DA,

That means so much to me - you're an earth angel.
Moonshine
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15 posted 01-06-2000 01:11 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx for your reply Red,
You speak words of truth.
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