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Marlon Brooks
New Member

since 2000-01-04

Posts 1
florence, s.c. usa

0 posted 2000-01-04 06:06 AM

I Long for you,
    When you're not here,
    When my heart is numb
    and my mind's not clear.
I long for you,
    in an artic cold
    where life is still
    and I'm not bold.
I long for you,
    in the dead of night
    where hounds howel
    at the blue moonlight.
I long for you,
    always and forever
    because I love you!

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-01-04 06:17 AM

What a lovely first entry, Marlon.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-01-04 06:42 AM

Welcome to passions

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2000-01-04 07:54 AM

Nice to meet you, Marlon - Welcome aboard....

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-01-04 08:10 AM

Welcome to the family. I like your poem and look forward to reading more from you!

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2000-01-04 08:50 AM

Great first poem , Welcome Marlon

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

6 posted 2000-01-04 09:35 AM

Very nice poem, welcome to Passion! Hope to see more of your work.

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

7 posted 2000-01-04 09:39 AM

Good: Another romantic on board..

HUGS

Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

8 posted 2000-01-04 09:47 AM

Nicely done Mr. Brooks
A very fine first post,
Keep this up, the gals will swoon,
And think that you're the "most"

A lonely heart that longs for love,
Takes forever to get better,
Or you can opt to join the club,
With me and Seargeant Pepper.

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

9 posted 2000-01-04 10:23 AM

Very nice Marlon, welcome to the house that dreams build.
Paul

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

10 posted 2000-01-04 05:26 PM

Yes, welcome to Passions Marlon! Wonderful poem!

Denise

Sonny
Junior Member

since 1999-12-18

Posts 29
Schenectady, NY, USA

11 posted 2000-01-05 11:13 AM

Very nice work Marlon. Welcome and please keep up the good work.

Sonny

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