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A Lonely Heart

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Marlon Brooks
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since 01-04-2000
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florence, s.c. usa


0 posted 01-04-2000 06:06 AM       View Profile for Marlon Brooks   Email Marlon Brooks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marlon Brooks

I Long for you,
    When you're not here,
    When my heart is numb
    and my mind's not clear.
I long for you,
    in an artic cold
    where life is still
    and I'm not bold.
I long for you,
    in the dead of night
    where hounds howel
    at the blue moonlight.
I long for you,
    always and forever
    because I love you!

© Copyright 2000 Marlon D. Brooks - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 01-04-2000 06:17 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

What a lovely first entry, Marlon.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

    

 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 01-04-2000 06:42 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions  
Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


3 posted 01-04-2000 07:54 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nice to meet you, Marlon - Welcome aboard....
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


4 posted 01-04-2000 08:10 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family. I like your poem and look forward to reading more from you!  
whiskey
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since 12-28-1999
Posts 1302
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5 posted 01-04-2000 08:50 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Great first poem , Welcome Marlon  
Songbird
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since 12-15-1999
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6 posted 01-04-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Very nice poem, welcome to Passion! Hope to see more of your work.
RainbowGirl
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since 07-31-99
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7 posted 01-04-2000 09:39 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Good: Another romantic on board..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

Toerag
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since 07-29-99
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Ala bam a


8 posted 01-04-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nicely done Mr. Brooks
A very fine first post,
Keep this up, the gals will swoon,
And think that you're the "most"

A lonely heart that longs for love,
Takes forever to get better,
Or you can opt to join the club,
With me and Seargeant Pepper.
Paul Hoekman
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since 12-28-1999
Posts 385
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>


9 posted 01-04-2000 10:23 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Very nice Marlon, welcome to the house that dreams build.
          Paul
Denise
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10 posted 01-04-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, welcome to Passions Marlon! Wonderful poem!

 Denise

Sonny
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since 12-18-1999
Posts 41
Schenectady, NY, USA


11 posted 01-05-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for Sonny   Email Sonny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sonny

Very nice work Marlon.  Welcome and please keep up the good work.

Sonny
 
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