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They're Wrong

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amber
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0 posted 01-04-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber


Have I been unfair to you,
Forced your life to change,
Did everything come crashing down,
With just a whisper of my name?

You see me as the only one,
That puts any faith in you,
It breaks my heart to know,
That your tears speak the truth.

They overlook the person,
That you try to so hard to be,
Everything I love about you,
They choose not to see.

I watch the way your eyes fade,
Away at the slightest touch,
It's like you dont want me to know,
That its hurting you this much.

But I'm the only one thats took the time,
To really look inside you,
To fall in love with all the simple things,
That I never imagined could be true.

So please dont let the tears fall,
From the words that are not true,
I try to soothe your worries,
By telling you I love you.

I have tried so hard to show you,
That your everything I love,
But still thier words hurt you,
I guess i havent done enough.

Your a beautiful person,
that's made me happy for so long,
Please believe me love,
When I promise you,they're wrong.




[This message has been edited by amber (edited 01-04-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 01-04-2000 02:26 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

amber this is very hearfelt and lovely, though sad in it's own rights
Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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2 posted 01-05-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Amber, this is great, sad but wonderfully written!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~
Toerag
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3 posted 01-05-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Very nicely said...from a very pretty young lady with an obviously beautiful heart..
Denise
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4 posted 01-05-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so touching and beautiful, Amber!

 Denise

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5 posted 01-05-2000 12:07 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I think we've all wished our love was enough to protect the one we love from all pain. *S* Beautiful poem, Amber...
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 01-05-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Amber: This shines with so much love sweetheart..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

lucky
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7 posted 01-22-2000 04:56 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

I don't know how anybodi else feels but I believe your wonderful amber this is very hearfelt and needless to say heartfelt and very nicely told from an obviously beautiful  (but maybe lonely) heart. naw i dont think so.

Lucky

 
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