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I like to write poems!
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I like to write poems! |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I like to write poems it's an addiction to me, poems about love and lifes realities, I write about the weather sometimes fishing agrees, but mostly I write about sailing the sea. Sailing the sea Yeah! sailing the sea I like to write poems about sailing the sea, I'm not quite sure why they come easy to me, guess I just like to sail the sea. My father flys a plane he flys high in the sky, looks down from up there and watches clouds floating by, he's free as a bird don't have to ask why? just look in his eye he likes to fly in the sky. My friend named Dan is like a brother to me, we fish down by the river almost constantly, when he went to Canada his pole he would take, because his fiance Lise she used to live on a lake. So he was fishing a lake Yeah! fishing a lake, brother Dan he liked to fish the lake, never knew how many fish he would take, as long as Dan could fish the lake. Now Steve and Ed they live out in Utah seems like they have no problems at all, I invision they ski all day and party all night, with brains that are loose, bindings are tight. They don't consider Wednesday a day with a hump, they're much too busy out there skiing the bumps. Skiing the bumps Yeah! skiing the bumps Steve and Ed they like to ski the bumps stay on the snow maybe take the next jump but Steve and Ed like to ski the bumps. I like to sail the sea, fly the sky, fish a lake, or ski the bumps. And, I like to write poems. [This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
Very creative poem, Paul. You're very good at what you like to do. samsonheart |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Well done Paul a very creative poem, lots of fun , I like it  Julie |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Paul - You're too funny - writing a poem about writing a poem... I can't wait to read all the ones about sailing the sea.....  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I agree with S.H You are good at what you like to do!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Thanks for your kind support. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Well, this was a nice cheerful poem to start off the day, Thank you! Makes me want to write a poem Liz |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Very light and lilting. Do you have a tune to go with it yet? |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Someday I hope, to also write poems, It may take years, and about "what" is unknown It's just something I'll work on, but my chances are slim, But this is where I'll post one, if I ever can. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Refreshingly simplistic and carefree...reminds me of some of Woody Guthrie's lighter moments, like "Take Me a Ride in Your Car." (wasn't that Woody? or was it Pete Seeger?? memory betrays me!) At any rate, I enjoyed your poem/song!  Claire |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Meadow....yep...Woody Guthrie... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You'll have to take me sailing with you sometime, Paul. There's nothing so wonderful in the world. Michael |
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