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samsonheart
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since 12-20-1999
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Missouri rez.


0 posted 01-04-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

She touches me and all my pain melts
she knows nothing of my love
Could it have been real, what I felt,
That she is my gift from above?
Tears of ache and passion flow
She is the girl I know

She tilts her head as she smiles at me
she looks so pretty that way
Her gentle hands conduct a symphony
Oh, the music she can play
In drunken awe of her golden glow
She is the girl I know

She lifts her hands up to her face,
she sings to me this song...
I have to move on out of this place,
wont you come along?
My soul wails anguish as she turns to go
She is the girl I know

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amber
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los banos, ca,


1 posted 01-04-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

i really loved this one, i remember wishing someone would look at me this way in awe. she must be beautiful, just as your poem!
Paul Hoekman
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since 12-28-1999
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2 posted 01-04-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

"she tilts her head as she smiles at me."
This is a really wonderful poem,
  and that simple gesture got me 3 kids
and a mortgage , be careful!
    ONLY KIDDING!  Paul
Severn
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3 posted 01-04-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow!

Like this, samson! 'her gentle hands conduct a symphony' - excellent line.

Good to see you back here.  

K

 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara
samsonheart
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Missouri rez.


4 posted 01-04-2000 03:42 AM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

Thank you Amber, Paul, and Severn...glad you liked it.

samsonheart
 
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