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hawk
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since 2000-01-04
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0 posted 2000-01-04 12:36 PM


I listen to your dreams
  and pray they come true

Your dreams for the future
  drive you through life

The future holds your dreams in it's arms
  waiting for you to take them

When your dreams DO come true
  I pray to be with you



© Copyright 2000 hawk - All Rights Reserved
tulip
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since 1999-07-04
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unknown
1 posted 2000-01-04 12:41 PM


Welcome to passions,
What a wonderful hope for the future!!  May both of your dreams come true!

Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
2 posted 2000-01-04 01:01 AM


Nice first post, welcome aboard.
    Buckle up and enjoy the ride!
              Paul

P.S.
I'm a dreamer to but then again I guess
we would'nt be HERE if we were'nt.

[This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-04-2000).]

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-01-04 01:20 AM


Welcome to passions
devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
4 posted 2000-01-04 01:23 AM


I fourth the welcoming commity!  Nice thoughts!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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5 posted 2000-01-04 03:09 AM


Welcome to Passions!

    

Nice first entry - watching for more.



 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-01-04 04:30 AM


Well now, this verse I must applaud for it speaks of a profound longing and love.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)


Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
7 posted 2000-01-04 07:29 AM


This poem is great - it combines desire and unselfishness quite nicely.... Wouldn't it be nice to have both???
Welcome to our Passionate world...

whiskey
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8 posted 2000-01-04 08:52 AM


Wonderful poem , Welcome  
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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Canyon Country, CA
9 posted 2000-01-05 11:27 AM


Welcome to passions, great poem!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

Denise
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10 posted 2000-01-05 11:27 AM


Welcome to Passions! Great poem!

 Denise


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