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I yearn to write...

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Master
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0 posted 01-03-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I yearn to write and yet my hand does shake,
I cannot capture what I felt on paper.
Your lips mixed with the fountain water make
Great Expectations seem much greater!


We stood above The Twins, as though two giants,
And mocked the golden bull without a fear,
Believing there was nothing real in science
We held on tight to what we felt was dear.

The time flew quickly on the Cupidís wings
And caught us while we too, were flying.
That heart is strongest which forever sings,
And love grows greater, not afraid of dying.

A mirror shattered like a broken heart
Reflections scattered, but not one did part.




†I fell in love and kept on falling





[This message has been edited by Master (edited 01-05-2000).]
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Denise
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1 posted 01-03-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Master! And, like you, I also yearn to write, only difference is....you have! (maybe tomorrow...)

 Denise

Paul Hoekman
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2 posted 01-04-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Thanks Master I really enjoyed the way this came together, Beautiful!
Reminds me of one I have'nt posted yet,
better get on it. The title that is.
             Paul
Songbird
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3 posted 01-04-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Beautiful, I love those last two lines.
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 01-04-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Wow, I liked this. This person has definitely been in love
Liz
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5 posted 01-04-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Yes!!! Powerful and moving piece. Well done  
Severn
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6 posted 01-04-2000 03:02 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very strong words here.

I like!



 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara
Master
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7 posted 01-04-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you everyone, some of the things in this one are very personal so don't try to make sense out of it. Thank you for responding!
Bojopy
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8 posted 01-04-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

WOW!!!!!! those last two lines were extremely good.....dont get me wrong the rest was good too.....overall a great poem......thanks for the read..........Bojopy

 


Master
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9 posted 01-05-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you Bojopy! glad you liked it!
Seaangel
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10 posted 01-05-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

lovely, my Master...(LOL) memories always hold, don't they?
Deborah
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11 posted 01-05-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

Beautiful poem, captured some deep feelings.
    Deborah
caroline
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12 posted 01-05-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

hmmm...perhaps you should include more of the personal in your writing, then.  Love this, it is excellent  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Kid Pedestal
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13 posted 01-05-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Kid Pedestal   Email Kid Pedestal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kid Pedestal's Home Page   View IP for Kid Pedestal

In the wake of this piece, I am but speechless.

Kid Pedestal




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Master
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14 posted 01-05-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

LOL Seaangel, another servant added to my collection!

Caroline, glad you liked it, I wasn't sure how people were going to respond to this one!

Thank you everyone for your comments!
 
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