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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-03 10:29 PM


       " Living end "

Living end he came to me
Restored my faith in life you see
Helped me through some terrible times
And now my best friend I do find
I share a closeness to his soul
In my heart he will never go
A love so pure and with out boundaries
A wonderful thing he gave to me
Never have I seen his face
But in my cell I hold his grace
Inner strenth he showed the way
And led me to a brighter day
I thank him for the time he's spent
Our friendship I believe was ment
Without his love I could not be
This person that he made me see


This Poem is written for a Special Guy in my life , Noone could ask for a better friend and listener
Thank you Gerard.

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-04-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Bojopy
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1 posted 2000-01-03 10:51 PM


Gerald is lucky man whiskey.  Always share with him in every aspect.  Loved the poem.................Bojopy


 


Severn
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2 posted 2000-01-04 02:29 AM


Whiskey - some beautiful words you have written here...

's K

 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

whiskey
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3 posted 2000-01-04 06:01 AM


Bojopy,
I will share everything with him hes a great guy, thanks for the reply  

Severn,
Thanks for your reply  

Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-05 11:25 AM


A beautiful tribute, Whiskey!

 Denise


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-01-05 11:29 AM


Whiskey,
Enjoyed the poem, set it up again, only fooling. *L* Sy

Pepper
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6 posted 2000-01-05 11:40 AM


Yes, a beautiful tribute indeed Whiskey!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



EnciNo
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7 posted 2000-01-05 12:50 PM


Sweet poem, beautifully written.
Paul Hoekman
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8 posted 2000-01-06 10:56 PM


so
so many
so many poems
so many poems for
so many poems for one
so many poems for one person
so much talent
THANKS!
paul

whiskey
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9 posted 2000-01-07 12:16 PM


Thanks to everyone for your replies

Thanks Paul for you little verse your a sweet man  

Dark Angel
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10 posted 2000-01-07 03:30 AM


Whiskey, this is a very beautiful tribute.
Well Done !!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2000-01-07 06:16 AM


A lovely tribute
From a lovely poet
Liz

whiskey
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12 posted 2000-01-07 08:19 AM


Thanks Dark angel , and thanks Liz  
Parker
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13 posted 2000-01-07 11:39 AM


Whiskey,

He is very lucky to have you as well.

James

Martie
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14 posted 2000-01-07 11:49 AM


A lovely and loving poem Whisky.  You are lucky to have such a friend in your life.
whiskey
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15 posted 2000-01-07 06:56 PM


Thankyou James and Marti I sure am lucky , I treasure him so dearly  
AL
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16 posted 2000-01-07 09:04 PM


very sweet and endearing. i liked it very much!!!!!!
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