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whiskey
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0 posted 01-03-2000 10:29 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

       " Living end "

Living end he came to me
Restored my faith in life you see
Helped me through some terrible times
And now my best friend I do find
I share a closeness to his soul
In my heart he will never go
A love so pure and with out boundaries
A wonderful thing he gave to me
Never have I seen his face
But in my cell I hold his grace
Inner strenth he showed the way
And led me to a brighter day
I thank him for the time he's spent
Our friendship I believe was ment
Without his love I could not be
This person that he made me see


This Poem is written for a Special Guy in my life , Noone could ask for a better friend and listener
Thank you Gerard.

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-04-2000).]
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Gerald is lucky man whiskey.  Always share with him in every aspect.  Loved the poem.................Bojopy


 

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2 posted 01-04-2000 02:29 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Whiskey - some beautiful words you have written here...

's K

 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara
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Bojopy,
I will share everything with him hes a great guy, thanks for the reply  

Severn,
Thanks for your reply  
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A beautiful tribute, Whiskey!

 Denise

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Whiskey,
Enjoyed the poem, set it up again, only fooling. *L* Sy
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Yes, a beautiful tribute indeed Whiskey!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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Sweet poem, beautifully written.
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so
so many
so many poems
so many poems for
so many poems for one
so many poems for one person
so much talent
THANKS!
paul
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Thanks to everyone for your replies

Thanks Paul for you little verse your a sweet man  
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Whiskey, this is a very beautiful tribute.
Well Done !!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Elizabeth Santos
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A lovely tribute
From a lovely poet
Liz
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Thanks Dark angel , and thanks Liz  
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Whiskey,

He is very lucky to have you as well.

James
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A lovely and loving poem Whisky.  You are lucky to have such a friend in your life.
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Thankyou James and Marti I sure am lucky , I treasure him so dearly  
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very sweet and endearing. i liked it very much!!!!!!
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