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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 01-03-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

In and out of the corridors that
link my thoughts and emotions
smiling face belies the turmoil
surfing waves of a swelling ocean

Up with the thrill
down with a deep breath
hanging on in between
chasing life and living death

Warm sand beneath my toes
sun caressing my skin
eyes mirror lapping water
sounds resembling a violin

Such beauty resides within us
it's how we look and feel life
green eyes sparkle with pleasure
tomorrow may bring - unknown treasure..




 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-03-2000).]
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Munda
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1 posted 01-03-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Thanks RG, needed that...tomorrow may bring unknown treasure. : )
Eloise
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2 posted 01-03-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Lovely poem RainbowGirl.
Denise
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3 posted 01-03-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, we just never know what lies around the next bend! This is beautiful, Cindy!

 Denise

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4 posted 01-03-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Every day brings a treasure......you, Cindy.

Wonderful poem.
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 01-03-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RainbowGirl,
Tomorrow itself is the treasure. Beautiful poem. *L* Sy
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6 posted 01-03-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

I agree with Sy tommorrow is a treasure in itself , wonderful poem  
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 01-03-2000 10:31 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Rainbow, I like the way you see life
This, incidently is a lovely poem
Liz
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8 posted 01-03-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Again, you've managed to put life in perpective in your poem...lovely!  
hoot_owl_rn
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We never know what tomorrow will bring, thanks for the reminder  
devina
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10 posted 01-04-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Heartwarming and beautiful as always Rainbow!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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11 posted 01-04-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for hawk   Email hawk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hawk

great poem
First__Knight
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I think there is a unfound treasure at the end of your Rainbow    Great Poem  

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


Dark Angel
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13 posted 01-04-2000 01:39 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

RG, this is lovely, true we don't know what tomorrow brings, and I think the simplest things are a treasure

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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14 posted 01-04-2000 09:13 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Munda: There's treasure to be found everywhere..  

HUGS

Eloise: Thank you  

HUGS

Denise: It isn't but thank you for trying to kid me..*g*

HUGS

Bal: I'm glad tomorrow never comes then..*g*

HUSG

Seymour: True, each is treasure, albeit sometimes burried..  

HUGS

whiskey: Thank you..   and I don't even drink it..ooops *g*

HUGS


Elizabeth: The only way to be seen, as life..    Did you get the reply mail BTW?

HUGS

PDV: You should see what else I put in perspective...ooops wrong forum..*g*

HUGS

Hoot: You of all people don't need reminding of that, you live with it..  

HUGS

devina: Thanks sweetherat..  

HUGS

Hawk: Thank you..  

HUGS

Knight: Well, that makes it all the more pleasurable, or does it?..*g*

HUGS

DA: I agree with you, it's the simple things..  

HUSG


 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-04-2000).]
Local Rebel
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15 posted 01-04-2000 09:20 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Tomorrow and Yesterday are the same word in some languages... just don't miss today's treasures pet..

Wonderful!  

 How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius
Iloveit
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16 posted 01-04-2000 12:00 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

this is really beautiful rainbow....hugs for your today's and hopes for your tomorrows  
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17 posted 01-04-2000 12:54 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

We never know what tomorrow might bring
But whatever the future, your soul will sing
With the spirit of love that you so kindly share
No matter what it is you have to bear.
A rainbow of hope, painting the skies...
A feast of beauty for our loving eyes...
A caring heart that erases the miles
To give big hugs and distribute smiles.
May your green eyes always sparkle with pleasure
For you, my dear friend, are always a treasure!

LngJhnAg
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18 posted 01-04-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Queen

I echo 'Deer - you are a treasure for all days.  So loving and full of hope.

Belle

I love your poem to Cindy - that is one of the sweetest poems I've seen you write.
suthern
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19 posted 01-04-2000 01:05 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

LJA: Shhhhhhh... Geesh! You're gonna wreck my mean, nasty-tempered reputation calling my poems sweet! LOL
Pepper
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I also will echo 'Deer....
This is beautiful Rainbow...
I was also very touched by suthern's poem to you...
  Hugs
RainbowGirl
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21 posted 01-04-2000 01:13 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

LR: I know sweetheart..  

HUSG

Iloveit:..HUSG back

Suthern: You're supposed to be making me laugh, not cry..thank you, that is so nice...*gulp*

HUSG Mother Hen

LJA: You little darling, you say all the right things...*g*

HUSG

Pepper: You snuck in there, thank you sweetheart..

HUSG



 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-04-2000).]
JTF
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22 posted 01-04-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Auntie, that's a wonderful tribute for a wonderful woman ...   ... I don't have Buzz eloquence but I can say you're a rare friend ...   ... May tommorow bring Rainbow and you happiness !
Echo Rhayne
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23 posted 01-05-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is BEAUTIFUL!!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~
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yes!
 
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