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Deborah
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0 posted 01-03-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

When all my secrets are whispered
All the lies exposed and clear
When everyone has seen my tears
And knows the thoughts which I hold dear
When trust has reached its outer limit
And the last word has been spoken
Then I know in my fragile mind
That my hear has coldly been broken

When friends become enemies
And people see my frown
When I stand all alone
My face turned down
When sadness is my constant companion
And smiles are few and rare
Then I know my hear is broken
And you no longer care

When I fight with myself
Knowing not why
When I struggle to see
To understand your good bye
When I cry myself to sleep
And think all things are bad
I realize that my heart is broken
And your love has made me sad

When everything is over
And nothing remains
When I realize the truth
You were just playing games
When I look at myself
And see loves lost touch
I know that my heart is broken
And that I miss you so much

© Copyright 2000 Deborah - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-03-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Deborah! Wonderful poem! Sad but wonderful!

 Denise

devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
Northern Cali


2 posted 01-03-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

God woman, you bring back some very painful memories for me.  This poem is vey well developed- to say the least.  I can only hope that you've learned from this experience, and it's made you a stronger person despite the hurting.  Believe me when I say that things will get better!!  And welcome to passions- where your pain- for the most part- is shared throughout us all!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Bojopy
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3 posted 01-03-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

Geeeees I can't even say anything about this it is brilliant.....Thank you.........Bojopy


 

Deborah
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4 posted 01-03-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

Thank you for posting your comments about my poetry.  I've almost never shared my poetry with others and it is encouraging to know people like what I write.  
    Deborah
Moonshine
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since 10-01-1999
Posts 269
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5 posted 01-03-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Great poem Deborah! I can relate to it, as can many others I am sure. I especially like the last stanza.
whiskey
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6 posted 01-03-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful poem Deborah, Thanks for sharing  
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 01-03-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Deborah,
A contradiction but the fair sex is like that.
Beautiful poem, well done, enjoyed the read.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


8 posted 01-03-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions
Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
Posts 1115
Wyoming


9 posted 01-03-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Very nice poem Deborah.  Welcome to passions  
hawk
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since 01-04-2000
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10 posted 01-04-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for hawk   Email hawk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hawk

i feel your pain, very nice poem
Gemini
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since 12-15-1999
Posts 1223
Wisconsin, USA


11 posted 01-04-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Very beautiful poem.  I've also been there.
Thank you.
"Love is always open arms, when you close your arms about love, you'll find you are left holding only yourself."  from Leo Buscaglia-Love.
John Foulstone
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since 01-01-2000
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Australia


12 posted 01-04-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for John Foulstone   Email John Foulstone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for John Foulstone

Another welcome, Deborah.
Ah, the great constant of the human condition - the ups and downs of falling in and out of love. Where would poets be without it? Enjoy the ride, 'cause you can't get off the rollercoaster, despite what Balladeer says.
Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
Posts 1691
Georgia, Fulton


13 posted 01-04-2000 06:39 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Very sad poem Debroah! Your emotions obviously displayed well on here. Welcome to Passions.

 Nathan
 
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