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Everyday was a story with you

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Bojopy
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0 posted 01-03-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bojopy



The lights upon the trees flash into my eyes
As the earthly ground shadows the skies
Im driving by all the places that we have been
Just trying to remember, remember when
What happened on that day at that place
I can see your figure and mine at that space
It all happened so fast but it feels like an eternity in me
Everyday was a story with you that was meant to be


kinda rough sorry but what do u think?


 

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patchoulipumpkin
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1 posted 01-03-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for patchoulipumpkin   Email patchoulipumpkin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for patchoulipumpkin

I really liked the line everyday was a story with you, brilliant line.  I think this is really great, it reminds me of my own compulsions to re-visit memories, and live through some of my past stories.  I liked it, very well written.
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Being someone who spends much time in memories, I love this!

 Denise

Meadowmuse
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3 posted 01-03-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I like this too...our memories are important and rich stories, and completely our own. Thanks.

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4 posted 01-03-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I see much potential in your words hun, keep up the good work!

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5 posted 01-03-2000 09:20 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

Traveling throught memories can be such fun and hurt so deeply. Your poem captured the way I so often look to the past.
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