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Everyday was a story with you
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Everyday was a story with you |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
The lights upon the trees flash into my eyes As the earthly ground shadows the skies Im driving by all the places that we have been Just trying to remember, remember when What happened on that day at that place I can see your figure and mine at that space It all happened so fast but it feels like an eternity in me Everyday was a story with you that was meant to be kinda rough sorry but what do u think? |
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patchoulipumpkin Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196Bermuda |
I really liked the line everyday was a story with you, brilliant line. I think this is really great, it reminds me of my own compulsions to re-visit memories, and live through some of my past stories. I liked it, very well written. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Being someone who spends much time in memories, I love this! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I like this too...our memories are important and rich stories, and completely our own. Thanks.  Claire |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I see much potential in your words hun, keep up the good work! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Deborah Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 41 |
Traveling throught memories can be such fun and hurt so deeply. Your poem captured the way I so often look to the past. Deborah |
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