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Meadowmuse
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0 posted 2000-01-03 07:27 PM


Last Light

Sail silently, my vessel stills the night
Sail soundlessly, awake in timeless flight
Sail through this life, sail through this life
Sail sightlessly, for faith abandons sight.

Night decries me, descending forces swoon
Night skies, display my calling moon
Night denies me, the futile fallen pneuma
Night invites me, my spirit stolen too soon.

Dear LadyClaire



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-03 08:15 PM


This is beautiful, Meadowmuse. So beautiful!< !signature-->

 Denise



[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-03-2000).]

Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-01-03 08:33 PM


Thank you, Denise...glad you enjoyed it.


Dear LadyClaire


Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 2000-01-05 10:57 AM


yes, quite beautiful!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

Meadowmuse
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4 posted 2000-01-05 07:20 PM


Echo, thanks for reading and taking time to let me know what you think. I'm glad you liked this little piece.

Dear LadyClaire


Martie
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5 posted 2000-01-05 07:51 PM


Lovely Meadow!

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Mike
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6 posted 2000-01-05 07:53 PM


I enjoyed.  Very nice.
Meadowmuse
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7 posted 2000-01-05 08:38 PM


Martie, Mike, thank you.

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