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Meadowmuse
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Last Light

Sail silently, my vessel stills the night
Sail soundlessly, awake in timeless flight
Sail through this life, sail through this life
Sail sightlessly, for faith abandons sight.

Night decries me, descending forces swoon
Night skies, display my calling moon
Night denies me, the futile fallen pneuma
Night invites me, my spirit stolen too soon.

Dear LadyClaire


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1 posted 01-03-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Meadowmuse. So beautiful!

 Denise



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Meadowmuse
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2 posted 01-03-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Thank you, Denise...glad you enjoyed it.


Dear LadyClaire

Echo Rhayne
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yes, quite beautiful!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~
Meadowmuse
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Echo, thanks for reading and taking time to let me know what you think. I'm glad you liked this little piece.

Dear LadyClaire

Martie
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Lovely Meadow!

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
Mike
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I enjoyed.  Very nice.
Meadowmuse
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Martie, Mike, thank you.
 
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