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Roller Coaster Farewell

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Nan
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25 posted 01-04-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Is it too late to say that I love this one, Deer? I'm still trying to figure out a way to stay at the pinnacle, ya know????
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26 posted 01-04-2000 08:03 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I am glad to see you expand your range into things you do not truly feel. When one writes as well as you do, it becomes a shame not to exercise that poetic license and write a plethora of perspectives. Just make sure that your audience knows which ones are truth and which are spun from the creative mind of an inspired writer.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
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because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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27 posted 01-04-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

loved this.....yep....*she says* "loved this" *as she clutches her ticktets for the next ride in her hand and wonders....*
great poem  
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28 posted 01-04-2000 11:30 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I knew a heart as big as yours couldn't slam the door on love... but the poem is superb!!! Great job, Balladeer!

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29 posted 01-04-2000 12:37 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Enjoyed this very much Balladeer.
I relate so very well to this.
Verse three is my most favorite  

Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Fred Hobbs
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30 posted 01-04-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

Balladeer!

Good Poem!
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31 posted 01-04-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Tumultous?...That blows the hell out of that response..ya think?..LOL...great poem...great thought...but loves lost and hearts broken make ya a bunch more nauseous than a carnival ride don't ya think?....I hold tight, enter the "ride" brave..and end up being the one thrown off so frequently?...Ya think it's my breath?......Yea, I know....it's not my breath.....after all....Bud doesn't smell that bad......Nice job Bally..as always...
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32 posted 01-04-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

hehe. Thanks for the great replies!

DreamEvil, I know of nowhere in poetic rules where it states the author must make sure the reader knows if it's fantasy or fiction. That's one of the beauties of creative writing. If someone believes it's true when it's not, that is a compliment to the writer. Poetry can be used to recount true experiences or to delightfully deceive....but I'm sure you know that.

LongJohn, use it with my blessings!  
 
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