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From Now & to When (just somthing for someone getting 'married' soon)

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Bojopy
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0 posted 01-03-2000 03:44 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bojopy



One day, before a night, of everlast
Two alone, then two together, in God's mass
Each with words of their Love
Kneeling together while bonding from above
Each moment forward will be as two
Nothing can break this if their true
In one week, one year, & even centuries
A love can blossom beyond it's memories
Everyday, in everyway, is it's way
Love beyond the words that you say
This is far, far from any end
but only a place & only when



 





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1 posted 01-03-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

I dont get many responses for some reason please be courteous...Me
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2 posted 01-03-2000 04:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I think this is very sweet!  

 Denise

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3 posted 01-03-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Very good...I especially liked"a love can blossom beyond it's memories" Very sweet words indeed!  
Tamera
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4 posted 01-08-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nicely done.
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5 posted 01-08-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Femme's Father   Email Femme's Father   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Femme's Father

Well I think this is simply beautiful! You have meditated on something that a lot more people ought to think on before they say I do. I think you have very deep thoughts as most poets do, and you expressed it so well!
Don't be discouraged about not getting too many responses- a lot of deep stuff don't get many responses because a lot of people don't know how to answer to those deep of thoughts...Very good- keep on writing-ok. I loved it. So tender-so beautiful. So Godly truthful...=Bless you...     james david
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6 posted 01-08-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I agree with all that dad said....this is a lovely poem, and it means the world to me.  I'm a bit old-fashioned I suppose when it comes to marriage.  I still see it as something quite sacred - not something to be taken lightly.  I guess that's why I'm pushing 30, and have not yet walked down the aisle....*sigh    I won't do it until I know deep in my spirit that I have made the right choice of who to spend the rest of my life with.  You have expressed  many of these deep feelings in this poem.  Thank you for sharing...
And try not to get frustrated in here, dad is right, is it VERY true that most works of great depth get overlooked, as most don't understand them, and so they're left scratching their heads, wondering how to reply.  hehee I've read a few from others that have left me feeling speachless!  LOL  Try being a bit more active, as far as replying to others too...sometimes you just have to *get out there* and round up fans - -    Seriously though, I've found that when I reply to someone else, I'll usually notice they come back & do the same for me...It's like making yourself *known*.  Be patient - you will find many who like your work...You do write with deep thought!  I applaude that...  Gennifer


 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
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7 posted 01-09-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

You did a great job. Its really sad that people don't take marriage as serious as they should.    
You expressed it well!!!   Keep writting!!!
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I like this, it's quite simple, but meaningful
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9 posted 01-09-2000 09:11 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is wonderful Bojopy   Im sure whom ever its for will love it
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