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A Tear

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Bojopy
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Plastured to a saffron loomed existence
Wishing to arise one day thru its distance
Atrociously awaiting as the searing never subsides
Relented without and having solace insides
Petering gradually as life diminishes
Lost in sorrow and looking for Heroic finishes
Murky in mind of the crimping demise
& now divulging the arcane cries
With no one near; to again fear
It comes only in one; a tear


 


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I haven't been on here long enough to know if people who write sad poetry are sad or not. I hope you're not! I'm not sure I understood it all, but it sounds as tho you are dying. are you? I hope not.
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Bbuzz thank you for the response and i write sad poetry to be happy....and no I am not dying but yet I am and so is everybody.... I dont mean that in a depressive way either I just know I'm alive and will die!!!

 
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This is wonderful! Great ending! 'a tear'
I love it!

 Denise

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