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Bbuzz
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0 posted 2000-01-03 02:08 PM


I don't think that you CAN know
How very much we love you.
Only One could love you more,
And He's the ONE Above you.

Your thoughtful ways and loving gifts
Are NOT the things you buy,
But the loving deeds and words and poems
And the fact that you ALWAYS try........

To make us happy by all you do,
For your concern that we're alright.
We know that you'd take care of us
If needed,(and soon we might).

You are ABSOLUTELY PRECIOUS to us,
Which I'm sure you already know.
But words unspoken can't be heard,
Precious Girl, We love you so!


© Copyright 2000 Bbuzz - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-03 02:10 PM


This is so beautiful, Bbuzz! Welcome to Passions! Keep sharing!

 Denise


Irie
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2 posted 2000-01-03 02:14 PM


Wow. What can I say Mom. This is awesome. And Thank You. I love you and Dad very much.


LngJhnAg
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3 posted 2000-01-03 02:23 PM


Bbuzz

The love in this poem comes through so powerfully.  Sheri may not realize just HOW powerful your love is until she has a child of her own.  How can anybody know that until they are on the mother's side of that relationship?  Your description is so clear!  You are blessed.

Irie
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4 posted 2000-01-03 02:44 PM


In response to LngJhnAg, I do have a child of my own, he is two and a half. And I'm sure as the years go on, the love will only get stronger. I love him dearly, as I do my parents.
Thank you again Mom, this means so much to me....

Love Sheri

Bojopy
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5 posted 2000-01-03 03:02 PM


This was well received and understood on all levels.  I hope tho read more of you're work. Thank you......Bojopy


 

Bojopy
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6 posted 2000-01-03 03:03 PM


This was well received and understood on all levels.  I hope tho read more of you're work. Thank you......Bojopy


 

Bbuzz
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7 posted 2000-01-03 03:37 PM


Thank you all so much for your responses. My daughter Sheri got me on here by writing a beautiful poem to us. It is so nice to be on here and see such loving, Happy, and humerous thoughts put to screen. It's nice to know there is such love still in the world. ALL of you, Thanks again for your comments.  Bbuzz( Bev )
Echo Rhayne
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8 posted 2000-01-03 04:44 PM


Bev (if I may)...This is absolutely beautiful, and let me be another to welcome you to Passions!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

Poet deVine
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9 posted 2000-01-03 07:43 PM


Welcome to 'our' family! Hope to read more from you!  

Marilyn
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10 posted 2000-01-03 07:57 PM


Welocme to Passions. This is a wonderful tribute to one so loved. It is wonderful that she can appreciate it.
hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 2000-01-03 09:39 PM


What a nice tribute  
welcome to passions

whiskey
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12 posted 2000-01-03 10:37 PM


This is a beautiful poem , welcome  
Thanks for sharing

Nan
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13 posted 2000-01-04 06:58 AM


Welcome, Bev - This is great - I'm bringing it back for another lap.....
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