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The Hand of God (Hoot's Challenge)
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The Hand of God (Hoot's Challenge) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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(This is my interpretation of the photograph presented in Hoot's challenge) THE HAND OF GOD It is the hand of God bringing forth His own likeness It is the birth of a spirit the passing of one life on to another it is the product of life's yearning for itself the perpetual motion of the soul a part of the Heavenly Spirit being reborn into human flesh in innocence, purity, and beauty it is the hand of God cradling His likeness comforting the soul and welcoming it onto the earth for one more attempt one more human lifetime in which to try to achieve the final destination to reach the spiritual level of Light of Love, of Himself a soul about to to embark on the journey set out by God This is Life Itself cradled in the purpose of life This is the child of God This is His creation This is a baby Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-03-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW! I like this very much, well done!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice Liz...a challange well met |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, Well crafted, beautifully done. Sy |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very,very beautiful Liz.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz This was great. I like the way you built up the topic with layers of texture, always keeping the subject of the poem in the foreground. I especially like the undertones of hope and promise. This was a very positive, uplifting poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! But of course! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Excellent reply to a challenge!! Challenge well met I think!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - missed this one. It is indeed excellent. K'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I can't believe I missed this one before, wonderfully poetic, and yes a challenge well met... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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