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Bojopy
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What days!we borrow from somthing yet unseen
What ways!we denounce each breath so keen
As untrivial as we are we still go further on
Laughing from without but within so withdrawn

In a moments occurence we will see one more light
The darkest bright; the darkest bright of our life
Whats to come in this alane of this therafter
Crosses, crossbones, or of any significant matter

Were we welcomed in life? will we be welcomed in death?
There was somthing here before and there will be somthing here when we left
The stories read & said lead us to this belief
but does that truelly give our thoughts of any kind of relief

 
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1 posted 01-03-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Great poem well done  
Paul Hoekman
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   When we accept life death has no power over us.Just a point of view from Jesus and me.I did enjoy the poem and understand,although it's been a while now.
          Sincerely,
                 Paul
Bojopy
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3 posted 01-04-2000 08:57 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

I can't figure out how to edit a poem if you read this please help

 


Deborah
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4 posted 01-04-2000 09:10 PM       View Profile for Deborah   Email Deborah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah

Nice poem bringing up a lot of good questions about life and death.  I especially like the line "Laughing from without but within so withdrawn", how true it is for so many of us.
    Deborah
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5 posted 01-05-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Bojopy- to edit a post, just go to that little icon above the post with the pencil in it! Click on that and then you can edit!

I like the thoughts in this poem!

 Denise

 
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