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whiskey
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0 posted 01-03-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Your voice "

Yesterday I heard a sound
Your outer voice I had found
Listening to you
I instantly knew
You were the one of which I dreamed
Your voice Id heard before it seemed
Not untill that moment did I know
How beautiful  your words did flow
Whispering words of love to me
You knew how much I longed for thee
The laughter of your soul shone through
A loving heart so strong and true
No better way to end the day
Than to hear the words that you did say
I love you , you confessed to me
I love you too can't you see
I feel the love of which you tell
I feel it deep within myself
So deep a sound Is contained
The voice of you inside my brain.

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 01-03-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Hey Whiskey how goes it down under?
Don't you ever right a bad poem?
What a lucky person you have,
by the way you write they must know it.
      Read ya later,
               Paul
whiskey
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2 posted 01-03-2000 03:06 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks Paul
Downunder is hot
And yes To me I write bad poems
The person He knows it I just have so many feelings for him its easy to write about how much he moves my soul  

Julie
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3 posted 01-03-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Such a sweet verse of adoration.
Denise
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4 posted 01-05-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Whiskey!

 Denise

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5 posted 01-05-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Voices like that do stay with us don't they?

Very nice.
hoot_owl_rn
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Sometimes a voice can touch our heart and soul
Tamera
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7 posted 01-05-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Most definitely a voice can touch our soul...this has happened before to me. Lovely poem!
Tamera
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8 posted 01-06-2000 12:06 AM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

Well whiskey, you know that I know how you feel.  I would put into words, but they would never sound as good as that!  You say  that you are a bad writer, I disagree.  I can't think of any of the greats that could make music with words like you just did.  All that I can say is that I love you more then you could possibley understand!

 
Eloise
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9 posted 01-06-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

What a beautiful poem Whiskey.  I really enjoyed the read.  It flowed so well.  
whiskey
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Thanks Everyone Your encouragement means alot to me  
Severn
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11 posted 01-07-2000 08:47 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

So - you are from DU huh? I live next door - ie NZ! Don't you just feel sorry for the majority of our fellow netpoets in winter!

Whiskey - this is a nice poem - great emotion.

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
whiskey
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12 posted 01-07-2000 08:54 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Severn,
Yes I am from Australia, NZ is a great place,
Yes I feel sorry and no I dont feel sorry for the others in winter I mean I hate it when its too hot , Thanks for your reply  
Toerag
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13 posted 01-07-2000 08:57 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

What a sweet poem....You must have a heart the size of Austrailia! I'd love to hear you recite it with that sexy "Aussie" accent!
Severn
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14 posted 01-07-2000 09:01 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Toe - desist in your defiling...!!!  

Well Whiskey - do you want to chuck some of that nice weather over here? Because our summer isn't much of one at present!

(Oh - and ignore Toe...)

whiskey
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Thanks Toe  

Severn, Id give you all the hot weather if I could it drives me insane  
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16 posted 01-07-2000 09:44 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Great poem, whiskey... some voices mean so much that you'd welcome the chance to listen to them... even if they were reading labels from canned soup! LOL
LngJhnAg
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17 posted 01-07-2000 10:34 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Whiskey Girl - that's right, ol' suthern (Belle) knows all about reading soup can labels - she has to read them for Toerag - it seems he doesn't trust the pictures on the labels.  He can't figure out how the soup company could put a large bowl into a small can.  He had to learn the hard way after he bought a case of Lima Bean soup thinking he was going to get a free soup bowl service for 24 - ha ha ha
Moonshine
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18 posted 01-08-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Wow - beautiful poem Whiskey! You're very lucky to feel the way you do. I am from AUstralia too! Where are you?
cokey_95
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Your poems are so beautiful..I hope you know what a great talent you have.
Elizabeth Santos
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20 posted 01-08-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Whiskey,
Is Toe bothering you again?
Now, as for your poem, it's very difficult to keep up with all your writing of late, but I try, and this is lovely. And yes, the sound of his voice can do wonders, unless he's a poet, then the sound of his pen can work the same magic
Liz
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