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tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 2000-01-03 12:57 PM

I want you laying next to me
Upon the tossled bed.
To look within those eyes of yours
and hear the words I've said.

I only want some time to spend
Not all the days of yore.
For every chance to be with you
It helps me to get through.

You say the words I want to hear
and looking in your eyes,
I truly think you want to be
closer at my side.

But yet the days are passing by
I wonder where you are?
How can I be a friend to you
when you're so very far?

I'm moving on away from you
You know my life is hard.
When you are ready just say the words,
I'll open up my heart.

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

1 posted 2000-01-03 01:57 AM

Been there done that,brings me back.
Well written,
thanks, Paul

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 2000-01-03 02:23 AM

I know just how you feel

Hope you get what you want , Wonderful poem , well done

Julie

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

3 posted 2000-01-03 03:03 PM

I seem to do it over & over again...maybe one day I'll learn!!!

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

4 posted 2000-01-03 03:07 PM

Wonderful .. Wonderful .. Wonderful..... I've been there too. I hope you get what you want...... Thank you ........... bojopy

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2000-01-03 03:38 PM

A poem full of yearning dear, I hope you get all that you expect.

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

6 posted 2000-01-03 03:52 PM

Thanks guys,
me too!!!!!!!

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

7 posted 2000-01-04 11:32 AM

I think you displayed your emotions wonderfully in this poem and the flow was wonderful too, twas a great read!

~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

8 posted 2000-01-04 12:23 PM

Thanks!!!

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