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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Sing your song of silence Among the mellow let me sleep. In these last waking minutes trust that thoughts of you I keep. Serenade my dreams so sweet be my shinning star for here amongst the moonlight your more beautiful by far. Sing your song of silence Let our thoughts become as one cast away bad memories for life has just begun. Time it had no measure 'till it shared its grace with you. Sing your song of silence there's no melody as true. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kevin, Very nice I enjoyed the read. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Nice poem for that special girl. Enjoyed it very much. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Kevin, excellent poem. I really enjoyed this one. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful, Kevin..this just flows perfectly...I love it.  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful , So beautiful she must be a special girl, well done |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey...where ya been, we've missed you around here. Beautiful |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Well done...especially liked the last four lines. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thanks for the replies guys its good to be back |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very beautiful, Kevin! Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Kevin, this is truly beautiful! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Beautiful poem - sings like a melody itself. Surprising from one so young! It has a mature poignant sweetness. Lovely. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Excellent Kevin, "You the man"!!!! Paul |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
wow kev! i really liked this one! awesome! |
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