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Kevin
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0 posted 01-02-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Sing your song of silence
Among the mellow let me sleep.
In these last waking minutes
trust that thoughts of you I keep.
Serenade my dreams so sweet
be my shinning star
for here amongst the moonlight
your more beautiful by far.
Sing your song of silence
Let our thoughts become as one
cast away bad memories
for life has just begun.
Time it had no measure
'till it shared its grace with you.
Sing your song of silence
there's no melody as true.


© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 01-02-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Kevin,
Very nice I enjoyed the read.
Songbird
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2 posted 01-02-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Nice poem for that special girl. Enjoyed it very much.
Eloise
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3 posted 01-02-2000 10:48 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Kevin, excellent poem.  I really enjoyed this one.
Alwye
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4 posted 01-02-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So beautiful, Kevin..this just flows perfectly...I love it.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


whiskey
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5 posted 01-03-2000 03:25 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful , So beautiful she must be a special girl, well done  
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 01-03-2000 04:01 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hey...where ya been, we've missed you around here. Beautiful
Meadowmuse
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7 posted 01-03-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Well done...especially liked the last four lines.
Kevin
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8 posted 01-03-2000 03:58 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

thanks for the replies guys its good to be back
Denise
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9 posted 01-03-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, very beautiful, Kevin!

 Denise

Echo Rhayne
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10 posted 01-05-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Kevin, this is truly beautiful!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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11 posted 01-07-2000 08:28 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Beautiful poem - sings like a melody itself.  Surprising from one so young!  It has a mature poignant sweetness.  Lovely.
Paul Hoekman
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12 posted 01-07-2000 08:44 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

  Excellent Kevin, "You the man"!!!!
                 Paul
          
~ViXeN~
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13 posted 01-09-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

wow kev! i really liked this one! awesome!
 
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