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Strong I Stand

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jaxjoy
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My conscience set me free to touch
the hollows of your soul and such.
Why dost thou abstain from me
and softly go thy sweet decree?
Tis oft I yearn to hear thy voice
to soothe and lull this heartbreak's noise.
Not a soul could bring such ardent splendor
with a touch, embrace so tender.
I walk alone with empty hand
weakened heart but strong I stand.
© Copyright 2000 Jacqueline Vachier - All Rights Reserved
tulip
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1 posted 01-03-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I hope I can say one day soon that I stand strong alone!!!
whiskey
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2 posted 01-03-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Very nice, sometimes it takes alot to stand strong  
hoot_owl_rn
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"weakened heart but strong I stand."
Very nice line  
Corinne
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4 posted 01-03-2000 02:39 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Oh yeah, Jaxjoy!

Damned if I don't that THAT feeling! I loved the portrayal of this in your poem!

I've only recently relearned an important lesson on this...IF someone out there loves you, then one should stop pining for the one who never will!

For the one who never will never should have been in the first place!

Corinne

p.s. The rewards of loving one who returns that love with equal passion, well, honey, all I can say is:  Oh My God! What a difference THAT makes!


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jaxjoy
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thanks to all for your kind words.  
Dark Angel
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Beautiful jaxjoy!! love the line "weakened heart but strong I stand"  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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This is beautiful and bittersweet.
Denise
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Oh, this is so beautiful! Very very nice!

 Denise

jaxjoy
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Thanks for your replies  
 
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