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mama duck
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0 posted 2000-01-02 05:32 PM



Seperated

One gray Autumn noontime
you visit me,
in the shadows,
to say good-by again.

I can't hold you anymore
or help you on your way.

We're become parted friends
and parted we'll stay.

The rain returns
and with it tears
for love that's gone away.

© Copyright 2000 Chris Moats - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 2000-01-02 06:21 PM


Chris - this is tender, and sweet - very nice work.





 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-02 07:35 PM


Ahhhhh....this is so sad. Yet beautifully done!

 Denise


Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 2000-01-04 02:58 AM


how very sad...you wrote this wuite beautifully!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

whiskey
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4 posted 2000-01-04 09:46 AM


So sad , But a wonderful poem  
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-01-09 10:06 AM


Chris -

Glad I found this.
Says a lot in a few words.
Keep it up.
Welcome.
~Marge~

Lisa Graham-Marshall
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6 posted 2000-01-09 10:24 AM


"Short but sweet..Lovely"
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