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mama duck
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0 posted 01-02-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for mama duck   Email mama duck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mama duck


Seperated

One gray Autumn noontime
you visit me,
in the shadows,
to say good-by again.

I can't hold you anymore
or help you on your way.

We're become parted friends
and parted we'll stay.

The rain returns
and with it tears
for love that's gone away.
© Copyright 2000 Chris Moats - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 01-02-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Chris - this is tender, and sweet - very nice work.





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Denise
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2 posted 01-02-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhhhh....this is so sad. Yet beautifully done!

 Denise

Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 01-04-2000 02:58 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

how very sad...you wrote this wuite beautifully!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~
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4 posted 01-04-2000 09:46 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

So sad , But a wonderful poem  
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5 posted 01-09-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Chris -

Glad I found this.
Says a lot in a few words.
Keep it up.
Welcome.
~Marge~
Lisa Graham-Marshall
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6 posted 01-09-2000 10:24 AM       View Profile for Lisa Graham-Marshall   Email Lisa Graham-Marshall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lisa Graham-Marshall

"Short but sweet..Lovely"
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