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broker6
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 132
Bellevue, NE, Sarpy

0 posted 2000-01-02 02:40 PM


In Her Garden Cool
by ©Richard Budig 2000

She daily walked with Jesus,
held His hand in her garden cool,
and conversed with Him
in passioned tones of the seduced.
Take him, Jesus, she prayed,
take him to Your home,
for daily, he flies his little plane
through Your mansion halls.
Such an easy matter for You,
such ugly trouble for me.
But flight after flight, for reasons unknown
her dashing pilot flew his little plane home,
and regaled her with stories of infinity,
and how pilots touch the face of God,
upon which, she sought her private bed
where she prayed longly and bitterly,
Jesus, O Jesus, why have you forsaken me?



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mama duck
Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41
Northern California
1 posted 2000-01-02 07:08 PM


Ah ha. I think I am beginning to understand. Your poems are beautifully biting. I like that. Truth is frequently unkind, and often not beautiful. I like your courage too. Chris
Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
2 posted 2000-01-02 08:02 PM


Just lovely broker. Such eloquent writing.
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 2000-01-04 03:05 AM


Broker, the emotion in this one is intensifying.  Great job with this one!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

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