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In Her Garden Cool

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broker6
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0 posted 01-02-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for broker6   Email broker6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for broker6

In Her Garden Cool
by ©Richard Budig 2000

She daily walked with Jesus,
held His hand in her garden cool,
and conversed with Him
in passioned tones of the seduced.
Take him, Jesus, she prayed,
take him to Your home,
for daily, he flies his little plane
through Your mansion halls.
Such an easy matter for You,
such ugly trouble for me.
But flight after flight, for reasons unknown
her dashing pilot flew his little plane home,
and regaled her with stories of infinity,
and how pilots touch the face of God,
upon which, she sought her private bed
where she prayed longly and bitterly,
Jesus, O Jesus, why have you forsaken me?


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mama duck
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1 posted 01-02-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for mama duck   Email mama duck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mama duck

Ah ha. I think I am beginning to understand. Your poems are beautifully biting. I like that. Truth is frequently unkind, and often not beautiful. I like your courage too. Chris
Julie
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Just lovely broker. Such eloquent writing.
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 01-04-2000 03:05 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Broker, the emotion in this one is intensifying.  Great job with this one!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~
 
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