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vandana
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0 posted 2000-01-02 11:27 AM



Yesterday came and went,
Now yesterday seems so far away
Because memories that were faded
were hurting our hearts,
Now we 're hurting our pain,
And sorrow are gone,
But It still hurts
When we think about the past,
As the years run fast,
Still we seem to be so strong
And love that we hold in our
hearts still there,
Let the time roll by
And let's not remember the past
We had,
Yet we think yesterday seems so far away,
But don't know why we feel the pain inside
When yesterday seems so far away,
Holding our breathe,
The memories are still there in our mind,
Yet we still let the past go,
But It's keeps coming back to our heart
Yet we feel yesterday seems so far away,

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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-01-02 01:21 PM


Very sad   but we must look forward instead of back.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-01-02 03:13 PM


Time passes so quickly, though yesterday seems far away, we can only hope to learn from it and move on....
First__Knight
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3 posted 2000-01-03 06:44 PM


Maybe this is the wrong impression I have....but when I read this one word comes to mind...."Pride"  Sometimes this one thing keeps us from saying I am sorry....Keeps us from saying I love you...or you hurt me.  The past may hurt because we can not close it because we were not honest with our selves.  We may have not done all it needed to help ourselves move forward.  Pride often keeps us quiet in our pain.....and that pain stays longer than it should.  Bless you

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"



whiskey
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4 posted 2000-01-03 06:51 PM


So sad , Life is so hard sometimes but try to focus on the positive things and let the bad things go .

Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 2000-01-05 10:51 AM


WoW, I don't know what to say.  The last 4 lines... The memories are still there in our mind, Yet we still let the past go, But It's keeps coming back to our heart, Yet we feel yesterday seems so far away...SO very true words!!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

neitham
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6 posted 2000-01-06 06:52 AM


Good one Vandana, very poignant, very touching!

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