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My Daddy And Me

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Michael II
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0 posted 01-02-2000 07:26 AM       View Profile for Michael II   Email Michael II   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael II

My Daddy And Me

I like to spend time with my dad.
Cause I don't get in trouble when I'm bad.
Except noisy dominoes make him mad,
But when I'm with him I'm never sad.

He taught me how to play chess.
He still likes to play me unless
I'm having a good day and I win,
Cause then I really rub it in.

He lets my play Ultima Nine.
But I still wish we had Ultima On-Line.
Cause we would play for weeks and weeks,
Just a couple of computer geeks.

I want to live with him someday.
Cause there's so many games we play.
But he still spends all his time with me.
My daddy is my M.V.P.

Happy New Year
© Copyright 2000 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-02-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

A wonderful poem! It sounds like the two of you have a great time together!  
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 01-02-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

awwww, I am glad to hear you have such a good time together!!  Happy New Year!

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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3 posted 01-02-2000 08:40 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

How ya doin' Michael Two?
Sounds as though you're a poet too?
Nicely done, and thoughts so grand,
There's nuthin' better than a great old man.
Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 01-02-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Michael II This poem is so precious, what a wonderful son you are. Your Dad has every reason in the world to be proud of you. I hope one day you will be able to live with him also, I think it would be gratifing for both of you.
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5 posted 01-02-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Michael II I am so glad you have such a wonderful relationship with your Dad. You both are very precious men in this world. I hope that someday you will be able to live with him too. Happy New Year Little Man!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

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6 posted 01-02-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Happy New Year MikeyMouse, and may that special dream of yours become a reality this year  

Good to see you posting!!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

Tara Simms
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7 posted 01-02-2000 11:59 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

That's so sweet, I bet your dad loved the part about being your MVP, I know I did.
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8 posted 01-02-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hey Mikey...
I have to agree with you - Your Dad is a very special guy.... If I were he, and you wrote that poem for me... I'd put it in a very special place and read it every single day.....
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 01-02-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Michael 11,
Enjoyed the read, enjoyed the subject, enjoyed the poem.
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10 posted 01-02-2000 12:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Mikey, this brought tears to my eyes! Wow...MVP! I'll bet this brought tears to Dad's eyes too! Fantastic poem!


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11 posted 01-02-2000 12:42 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

You Dad is a very lucky man Mikey Mouse. He has you and you love him so very much. My hope of you this year is that all your wishes become a reality. Great writing young man!
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12 posted 01-02-2000 12:48 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is a great poem, Michael II... and the love between you and your dad is wonderful!! Hope your new year is a very happy one!!  
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13 posted 01-02-2000 01:05 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Wonderful poem Mikey Mouse!!  
I hope your wish comes true for you and your dad real soon!!
Happy New Year to you both.....
btw....You've got real talent in your to read your work!!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

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14 posted 01-02-2000 01:11 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Aaawwww....Mike, this brought tears to my eyes. I think you and you dad are both very lucky to have each other and to love each other like you do. I hope that all your wishes come true in 2000.
Great poem!!
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15 posted 01-02-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for Sylvester   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Sylvester

I tawt I taw a puddy tat....
I DID - I DID taw a puddy tat...

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16 posted 01-02-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well, Mikey.  Your daddy certainly is very proud of you.  You are my M.V.P. as you already know.  Perhaps I should post our M.V.P. poem so people would know just where that came from.  

Now, just because you wrote such a touching poem, don't think your getting anymore computer priveleges tonight!
And don't threaten me with them dominoes either...  Arghh, I don't think I can win this one.  

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17 posted 01-02-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Aww! Mikey this was so very precious.  It's wonderful to see Daddy and Son like this!
I hope your wishes come true some day buddy, in the near future!

Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.


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18 posted 01-02-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Vundebah job Mr. Mike!
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19 posted 01-02-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for maedavid   Email maedavid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maedavid

Great poem Michael II.  I knew you had another poem just laying around wanting to be read.  Good job!!  I know your dad is so very proud of you.  By the way, I love to play dominoes.  Maybe someday we can play.

 The only way to know Love, is to Know God.

[This message has been edited by maedavid (edited 01-02-2000).]
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20 posted 01-02-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sounds to me like there are two lucky Michaels there.....make that three for letting me share your words.
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21 posted 01-03-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Hey there Mikey my boy!  My cutie!     Hey, I came in here, and was soooo  happy to see another poem from you!  Great job, like everyone else said!  If you keep on writing and practicing, one day real soon, you're gonna be better than your daddy!  LOL   I think it's so cool that you like to write poems too!  I love your picture too, BTW...I can't believe you don't have lots of girlfriends, but you're probably better off not messing with them just yet....girls are nothing but trouble!  LOL  I should know!  hehe  Just look at what's happened to your dad and me!  I put a spell on him, and he's been mine ever since!  (just kidding - no spell - just love...)  We'll have to chat again real soon!  

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
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22 posted 01-03-2000 03:30 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Arent dads just the best , sounds like you and your dad have a great time , wonderful poem well done  
Dark Angel
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23 posted 01-03-2000 06:14 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Michael II This is such a wonderful poem, well done!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
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24 posted 01-03-2000 06:20 AM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

It's nice to see such a bond between a father and son.  I enjoyed every part of this.  Thanks for sharing

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